He waits for her

His time has come to leave this place,
His suffering needs to be over, for a month
He has held on and his body is tired and sore now.

The machine breaths for him,
And he no longer tries to take the few breaths he used to,
His eyes no longer see the nurses around him.

He lifts his hand and tells the angels waiting for him,
"wait, I am not ready yet, she's coming",
The nurse doesn't hear him but she makes out what he's saying,
He says it over and over.

She wonders if he is scared, but when she gets closer she feels
The peace like a blanket around him,,
He is alone in the room but the room feels full.

All day long he tells them "wait, not yet", and as night falls
His grand daughter rushes in from the flight she took to get here.

She takes his hand, strokes back his hair and talks to him of all
they had done, she tells him how loved his is.

His eyes close and a peace fills his face, he smiles, relaxes, and the machine
Complains because it can no longer read his heart beat.

The angels hold out their hands....
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2013
About this poem:
A gentle soul who is at peace now

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Happygolucky4u
blues crying I loved this emotional story poem. I believe sometimes they will wait or try to before they leave. sad flower
shadow1950
oh my ladyjewel this is a stunning write I totally love it absolutely superb kudosteddybear bouquet gift hug kiss wine bowing
ladyjewel
Thank you ladieshug
Yes they do wait, and he was a gentle, gentleman:-)
Odette67
This lovely though sad poem reminded me of my Mam. Mam would ask me every day when my daughter was coming from America where she lives. My daughter was here a couple of days when Man let go. angel hug purple heart
ladyjewel
hug Odette, am glad she was able to wait teddybear
paloma66
Dear Ladyjewel this made me cry remembering my daughters last moment she kept seeing a tall figure in white in a chariot and kept looking towards the door for her kids but the doctor asked us not to let the kids in as it would be embedded in their memory for life.In the end she took my hand and whispered,"Mum I know you will take care of them" and I did.angel sad flower crying Lovely but sad write my dear.
Pipin
This poem was captured so emotionally beautifully and reminded me of my mothers long suffering passing over, thank you crying
Jyonnah
My beloved aunt was slipping away in the hospital when I held her in my arms and talked about all the joys of springtime (which she loved). I then told her to look at the window, how the warm breeze was blowing the curtains so softly. She turned to look, smiled and then exhaled her last breath. It was as if she went into the breeze toward heaven. This beautiful story of your friend reminded me of that moment. Thank you, LadyJewel! angel heart wings rose rose
ladyjewel
Jyonnah, i am sure your aunt did go into the breeze, and i know she was glad you held her,hug

Pipin, your mom i know is with you, when you need her she will be there:-)hug

Paloma, your daughter knew her kids were safe, and she saw them as soon as she passed, she is always going to be with themhug

I am glad this touched on so many memories of loved ones, i believe this (earth) is one step in our lives, and we need to make it count to the people we leave behind, we only take our memories after all, so make good oneskiss
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