I sit back and sip this on this champagne Wondering why my friend Dwayne Could not restrain Shooting that cane into his veins I use to ask him to explain What was meant to be gained The only answer I received was the fast lane We fought everyday because I was trying to change his brain From being addicted to this new kind of acid rain But he could not drain The demon of the oil stain Because he was addicted to more then one thing Now me and his family feel nothing but pain No longer with us we have to maintain Even though he broke our closed chain Life moves on and I still feel the pain
dear poet...lucc27 well done... you have a greate power to write poems... usage of words are beautiful.
and your lost friend makes you pain...
sabeel.
aware3navarre, Florida USAAug 14, 2009
Keep writing-it's a good way to work through your lost, and so much better to get those feelings out, and also to share them with the many, who are going through the same senseless losses. It is so hard to watch someone you care about self-desruct, you feel so helpless. Take care, thanks for sharing, you have a wonderful gift with words, hope to read more from you. Blessings, aware3
Comments (4)
cant loose the Pain
Gop down to the River
So You Can Pray
Understand your loss
was your Gain!
Larry
well done...
you have a greate power to write poems...
usage of words are beautiful.
and your lost friend makes you pain...
sabeel.