Isolation a new best friend dangled in the dark, quiet a situation she is in the girl in the mirror who is she the image is gone how could that be a long dimming hallway no other way out you ask yourself what is this supose to be about skin feels like paper it could tare with the slightest of movement the walls are dissolving fluids begin to drip, everything could use an improvement deep down there an awareness that the problem is not external something is just broken deep down inside weathered drapes flew wickedly the girl she screamed and cried people just as animals we choose our prey keep our enemies closer right, won't you come out and play the town almost a ghost town they feed on those they pick lies are like candy sweet to their lips hurt people like humor just a warm little trick she took it for so many years walked the other way what is the worse they could do or say in the hallway or at home always felt so all alone carried it like a shell on her back soon she began to crack that day came where she found herself pulling out a gun finally feeling like she had won to have them begging for their life something didn't seem so right why do they do this push people so far she fired some rounds in the air then jumped in her car as she fought to regain control she screamed to the sky she spoke only briefly wanted to know why why did she have to grow up here it being this way everywhere was her greatest fear that girl went away and never looked behind I supose she knew exactly what she would find
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Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
This piece was a totally different process for me, I've never took a bit of my life and threw it in a fictional story and made the story into a poem.So I would really appreciate any comments, I love comments anyway good or bad I can take construtive crictism and am fully aware that my spelling sucks sometimes (luckly when I write for work I have an editor right *lol*) so please comment away.
Comments (1)
but i have a doubt..is it by horrible incident..?
who is this..?
let me to know..if you wish ..
sabeel.