the girl had enough

Isolation a new best friend
dangled in the dark, quiet a situation
she is in
the girl in the mirror who is she
the image is gone how could that be
a long dimming hallway no other way out
you ask yourself what is this supose to
be about
skin feels like paper it could tare with
the slightest of movement
the walls are dissolving fluids begin to
drip, everything could use an improvement
deep down there an awareness that the problem
is not external something is just broken deep
down inside
weathered drapes flew wickedly the girl she screamed
and cried
people just as animals we choose our prey
keep our enemies closer right, won't you come out and play
the town almost a ghost town they feed on those they
pick
lies are like candy sweet to their lips hurt people like
humor just a warm little trick
she took it for so many years walked the other way
what is the worse they could do or say
in the hallway or at home
always felt so all alone
carried it like a shell on her back
soon she began to crack
that day came where she found herself pulling out a gun
finally feeling like she had won
to have them begging for their life
something didn't seem so right
why do they do this push people so far
she fired some rounds in the air then jumped in her car
as she fought to regain control she screamed to the sky
she spoke only briefly wanted to know why
why did she have to grow up here
it being this way everywhere was her greatest fear
that girl went away and never looked behind
I supose she knew exactly what she would find
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Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
This piece was a totally different process for me, I've never took a bit of my life and threw it in a fictional story and made the story into a poem.So I would really appreciate any comments, I love comments anyway good or bad I can take construtive crictism and am fully aware that my spelling sucks sometimes (luckly when I write for work I have an editor right *lol*) so please comment away.

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Comments (1)

sabeel
dear poet...a good work...
but i have a doubt..is it by horrible incident..?
who is this..?
let me to know..if you wish ..
sabeel.
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