jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 1, 2010
But Freedoms Rhymes will reload again to give its life for You! what a fascinating poem you made here sir,,very well said and well penned..thanks i love it,,youre sooo good in nailing the words dear,very nice
freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USANov 1, 2010
I only regret that I have but one rhyme to give for my freedom... Kudos!
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 1, 2010
Much appreciated noMore.' I really wanted this one to be right. cafe'
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 1, 2010
Thanks free'.. Your comment was the making of a great poem! cafe
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 1, 2010
Thanks jeddah queen. Had to get this poem out of jail! lol. cafe
amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USANov 1, 2010
EEK! It must have been cold and lonely in the jail cell...thank you for saving the poem
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 1, 2010
This poem has an eerie resemblence of our constitution the American way. Right now it's just a poem that put to death and maybe next our Bill of rights. Thank you for sharing cafe ya you nailed it.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 2, 2010
cafetwo2010, you could have been writing about half of all my poems. Since about half are awaiting the executioner!! I absolutely LOVE your poems, the way you get to the heart of what you are writing about, how you make me feel it!!!
Way to go cafe!!!!
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 2, 2010
Your compliment is pure gold to me Bella.. If I can make a connection in a positive way, every word is worth it. I suppose, to be understood is a real prize. Keep writin' darling! cafe
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Good poem.Keep up the excellent work
will reload again
to give its life
for You!
what a fascinating poem you made here sir,,very well said and well penned..thanks i love it,,youre sooo good in nailing the words dear,very nice
Way to go cafe!!!!