Poem Gets Death!

A Poem was sent
to prison
To await
execution

From fearful minds
who'd silence
Freedoms Revolution!

At 6am. the guns
will fire
Every phrase shot
through and through

But Freedoms Rhymes
will reload again
to give its life
for You!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Nov 2010

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N0morebull
Cafe,
Good poem.Keep up the excellent work
jeddah12
But Freedoms Rhymes
will reload again
to give its life
for You!
what a fascinating poem you made here sir,,very well said and well penned..thanks i love it,,youre sooo good in nailing the words dear,very nicehug wine
freeatlast64847
I only regret that I have but one rhyme to give for my freedom... Kudos! beer
cafetwo2010
Much appreciated noMore.' I really wanted this one to be right. cafe' bouquet
cafetwo2010
Thanks free'.. Your comment was the making of a great poem! cafecheers
cafetwo2010
Thanks jeddah queen. Had to get this poem out of jail! lol. cafeheart1 heart1
amahlala
EEK! It must have been cold and lonely in the jail cell...thank you for saving the poembouquet
cafetwo2010
amahlala.. The poem had the last word! cafe teddybear
kickit22
This poem has an eerie resemblence of our constitution the American way. Right now it's just a poem that put to death and maybe next our Bill of rights. cheers Thank you for sharing cafe ya you nailed it.
cafetwo2010
You're right on target kickit'.Thanks, cafethumbs up
BellaTheRebel48
cafetwo2010, you could have been writing about half of all my poems. Since about half are awaiting the executioner!! I absolutely LOVE your poems, the way you get to the heart of what you are writing about, how you make me feel it!!!

Way to go cafe!!!!cheering bouquet wave
cafetwo2010
Your compliment is pure gold to me Bella.. If I can make a connection in a positive way, every word is worth it. I suppose, to be understood is a real prize. Keep writin' darling! cafe thumbs up gift heart1 heart wings bouquet
BellaTheRebel48
You keep writing also, darlin! I wish I was still living in Maryland, I'd invite ya out for a cup of coffee. I absolutely ADORE your style!!!!peace head banger
cafetwo2010
Wow Bella! A coffee invite! I'm flattered simple.. Never had coffee with a real live Rebel! cafe heart1
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