I walk the streets of memory A town of empty ruins The streets are paved with misery On which my dreams are strewn Darkness filled with imagery A scene where players play A stage where pain is symmetry I long to turn the page I hear the call of chivalry The death of empty words I feel I'm moved to rivalry A duel of broken swords I feel my soul in agony I long to simply run But chains I've forged through blasphemy. They drag me from the sun. So here I lay a memory A cold and empty shell The tears I've shed in misery My story now they tell
poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaAug 15, 2009
really very effective and sensitive words , i feel it when i read it , u have wide imagination in ur writing , really beautiful words , thanks for share any one read for u travel in ur thoughts and u make the reader live in the moment u write
habs360OPSan Jose, California USAAug 15, 2009
Thank you.
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaAug 16, 2009
Very nice expressed figurative language with deep emotion inside.Very good poetry habs.Thanks for sharing
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any one read for u travel in ur thoughts and u make the reader live in the moment u write
good poem..
i like these lines.."So here I lay a memory
A cold and empty shell
The tears I've shed in misery
My story now they tell
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thanks for share..
sabeel.