FREE!!!!!!!!

One day i'll be free
free, free
from my biggest enemy
the only one that can spoil my day
take my light to make me lose my way
take my happiness and bring me sorrow
give me false hope of tomorrow
allow me pain
that i should feel
steal my inner beauty and make me unreal
look at me
take me off this rollercoaster fantasy
why wont you humble me?
give me courage to see
love not lust was meant for me
won't you fight for me?
do what right for me
oh yes you my biggest agony
depart from me
as impossible as it may seems
i beg you set me free
free, free
to fly to new heights
to find joy deep within
instead of leading help me flee from sin
what great plight to behold
this is the cry of my soul
free, free
just let me be me not what you want for me
me
for my biggest enemy is ..........................me
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Posted: Nov 2010
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ginger1959
I sure can relate...you words touch my soul!!!! Beautiful

Truly,
Gingerhandshake wine
rhysy
thank u ginger
Ladybee42
how cool! 'my biggest enemy is me!' many of us could say the same thing - you sound like you are ready to rock and roll though - go you...cheering thumbs up bouquet
loving the positive feeling in this
caroljoyce
I can relate to this one! Very good!
CJthumbs up
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