Rain is the tears of God God is crying for us I take the all tears and throw umbrella away tear seems like shower It is cold feel so cold the tears can vanish our sadness I feel how much we are sad by cold tears I want someone to take all my tears will God be smile tomorrow? Hoping God will be smile tomorrow like sunshine and smile for us
This is first time to trying to post poem..... quote the rain for our emotion. I like rainshower kind makes me feel this way. ofcourse sunny day too. OMG my english........ Thank you.
pinkcoralOPNaha, Okinawa JapanNov 20, 2010
wwwwwwwwwhaaaaaaat john.... wwwwwwhy are you here....... oh,thank you my friend.
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 20, 2010
not bad deary,keep writting,
stillframeoklahoma city, Oklahoma USANov 20, 2010
i wrote poems on here pink you should take a look
pinkcoralOPNaha, Okinawa JapanNov 20, 2010
oh sis...... yes,keep trying. I am just a bigginer...........Thank you very much.
pinkcoralOPNaha, Okinawa JapanNov 20, 2010
john yes I will.
pinkcoralOPNaha, Okinawa JapanNov 20, 2010
oh,thank you very much empyrean. I am so glad you being here. Have A wonderful day/nite.
Comments (13)
quote the rain for our emotion.
I like rainshower kind makes me feel this way.
ofcourse sunny day too.
OMG my english........
Thank you.
wwwwwwhy are you here.......
oh,thank you my friend.
yes,keep trying.
I am just a bigginer...........Thank you very much.
I am so glad you being here.
Have A wonderful day/nite.
Regards,
Dylan.
I am so glad you liked it.
thank you for your thoughts.