Glowwe

This is how you were, young, free, and lean,
You moved my heart with words, and we thought no more,
I can walk to your door but never come in,
And move you to tears or you'll move me again,

Old folks they wait by the garden gate,
They used to ride bikes late into the night,
Now when I talk I hear you speak,
I still dream of you but I'm not full of dreams,

The sun came up and I wanted to shine,
We went on walking right into the night,
I will be alright, if I am the light,
I will be alright if you want me to glow,

If the devil comes he can take my soul,
If the devil comes he can take my soul,
If I keep my heart I will be alright,
If I keep my heart you'll still know,

When the sun comes up you will have to go home,
When the sun comes up you will leave me alone,
If I keep you in my sights, I will be alright,
So that I might, still think you won't go,

I wept for you when you went away,
But I am the night time and you are the day,
The gathering gloom had me consumed,
I will be alright if you still know,

The evening time is the only way,
For gathering nights to meet departings days,
I will be alright, if you still know,
That you are the sun, and I am the moon.



(This is how we remember the feelings when they come around,
With our hearts thrown over our shoulders,
Hoping they'd never be found.)
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Posted: Jan 2011
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And goodbye to the old days.

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gnj4u
Hi, DeathToHeroes,
I still dream of you but I'm not full of dreams... This lovely, heart-felt write has much sadness and truth of love and loss. Thank you for sharing.
QuietStormF
Simply beautiful! Lovely.. I am going to read this one many a sleepless night.Thanks so much for sharing it here with us!!teddybear
DeathToHeroes
Thank you to both of you for the kind comments.
Macduff5
This is such a lyrical piece I think you are following in the traditions of the great Irish poets. Such a powerful write.cheers
DeathToHeroes
Ha, I don't know if I'm there yet! But thank you very much, I appreciate the comparison for sure.
DeathToHeroes
I guess this and 'Neighbours' are about the same thing. And the same people.
lavina
An other nice poem
If I keep my heart I will be alright,
If I keep my heart you'll still know

This one seem so deep feeling
niah9
When poems are text, not heartfelt...the real emotions are lost, here I felt the sadness when one left, making it believable...well written and sensitive....enjoyed it from start to finish...Niahcheering teddybear
DeathToHeroes
Thank you to both of you above for the comments. Niah, always with a kind word :) If they seem to have a musical quality it's because I do sing them.
DeathToHeroes
@Lavina

They are probably my favorite two lines too! :)
ReaderOfSouls
Howdy DeathToHeroes tip hat

Be careful walking with the Devil when you're in love, he's likely to play some tricks on ya. laugh Wonderfully written!! thumbs up wine hug heart wings
DeathToHeroes
Thanks for the advice Reader of Souls :) But I see this poem as optimistic, or nostalgic; not fearing the devil because you think that the world will be alright anyway kind of deal. That is how it is for me anyway.
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