the coat (seductive)

He had said he would be there at 8pm, he pulled up at her gate and she was at the window waiting, she smiled at him and waved.
He watched her walk towards the car as he stood holding the door open, her hair was loose and flowed like silk as she walked, her high heals showed off her ankles,
And a long flowing black coat covered her from her neck down past her knees.

She smiled a shy smile and climbed into the car, as she lifted her legs in her coat slipped slightly and he saw all the way up to her thigh, he stopped and stared as she let the coat slip open slowly to show him she was wearing nothing else but stockings that ended just over her knees topped with black lace.

She watched his face and when his eyes met hers she smiled a shy seductive smile and leaned back waiting to be taken where ever he wanted to take her.

His face and his bodys reaction, his trembling hand as he closed the door and walked round to slid into the drivers seat, the look in his eyes and the hand he reached out to stroke her cheek with were all exactly how she has imagined it.

She shivered and smiled, tonight was going to be magical..
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Posted: May 2013
About this poem:
kind of did this once:-) but not as bold x

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Comments (7)

shadow1950
beautifully written and tasteful you have a talent for this type of write well penned dear LJ
teddybear gift bouquet hug kiss cool wine
darkhorse555
your writting is growing in strength beautifully written a nice piece sheus is open if you want a laugh a poem i wrote a tottaly mad one go with your coat when you read it you will laugh thumbs up wow wine
Poetnumber1
I could tell that you really enjoy writing in this style.Really enjoyed this.
Fellsman
Forgive my typo - that of course should read bullet-point wink
ladyjewel
Thank you kind Sirhug kiss
Jyonnah
Woman, you write with flames of passion! heart beating Your keyboard is probably on fire. laugh Excellent write, my friend. You need to write romance novels. thumbs up wine heart wings
fjamesj9701
I do believe we have poetry in motion here. You have proven to be a wonderful mind and heart indeed , oh an a voice just as lovely. Thank you for sharing. On side note im thinking podcast poetry now. You go firstgrin...Jesse wine
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