Tears

Raindrops falling
sky is blue
cloudless sky
morning dew
misty mountains
waking up
smell the coffee
poured in your cup
somebody somewhere
has falling tears

Loves sudden end
no reason said
he just went off
no words were said
mama was crying
on that summer day
only later understood why
we saw mama sit and cry
lots of mamas, singles, too
sofa tears hidden view
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Posted: Feb 2011

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swade777
This one hits home with me... only it was papa's tears upon the sofa as mama was the one that suddenly left without warning! Good write!
christian22
hi swade777, thanks for that comment, a memory you recalled, sorry that happened to your dad, appreciate the comments, take it easy..
gnj4u
Hi, christian22,
sofa tears hidden view is such a compelling line to describe such sadness that entered the child's world.
SCatlyn
Great writing... and so very touching..... sad flower
rose rose
thesunandthesea
crying great write!! you have me cry by your write!!!!!!!!crying but its ok!!!!... rose

Loves sudden end
no reason said
he just went off
no words were said


When my dad passed away, my mum cried ..yes a lot! But LOVE never ends! She never looks for anyone else to replace my dad! Love last forever even if another soul has gone to the heaven. Love remains in the heart. Both mum n me. ^_____^
purple heart
woolfwithaview
really lovely
boyshchrm6
Really good write. I'm sure many can relate during
these turbulent times.angel angel thumbs up peace angel
christian22
hi gn, thank you once more for your viewing and appreciation of this poem..thanks gn
christian22
hi dear scatlyn, thank you too for your warm replies to this poem, appreciated..
christian22
hi sunandthesea thank you too for your nice remarks on the poem, i am sorry for your loss of your dad, for you and your mom..hard time for you both, thanks for commenting, and dont cry too much over this one poem..thanks again..
christian22
woolfwithaview, thanks for your nice comments on this piece of writing..
christian22
hi and thanks once more boyschrm6, yes life has a way of introducing tears into our daily walk..but hopefully not for long..
Macduff5
A beautifully crafted and powerful poem. Thanks for sharing. handshake
christian22
hi macduff5 hey thanks for viewing and leaving the comment, appreciate it..thumbs up
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