Raindrops falling sky is blue cloudless sky morning dew misty mountains waking up smell the coffee poured in your cup somebody somewhere has falling tears
Loves sudden end no reason said he just went off no words were said mama was crying on that summer day only later understood why we saw mama sit and cry lots of mamas, singles, too sofa tears hidden view
great write!! you have me cry by your write!!!!!!!! but its ok!!!!...
Loves sudden end no reason said he just went off no words were said
When my dad passed away, my mum cried ..yes a lot! But LOVE never ends! She never looks for anyone else to replace my dad! Love last forever even if another soul has gone to the heaven. Love remains in the heart. Both mum n me. ^_____^
Really good write. I'm sure many can relate during these turbulent times.
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 18, 2011
hi gn, thank you once more for your viewing and appreciation of this poem..thanks gn
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 18, 2011
hi dear scatlyn, thank you too for your warm replies to this poem, appreciated..
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 18, 2011
hi sunandthesea thank you too for your nice remarks on the poem, i am sorry for your loss of your dad, for you and your mom..hard time for you both, thanks for commenting, and dont cry too much over this one poem..thanks again..
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 18, 2011
woolfwithaview, thanks for your nice comments on this piece of writing..
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 18, 2011
hi and thanks once more boyschrm6, yes life has a way of introducing tears into our daily walk..but hopefully not for long..
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 18, 2011
A beautifully crafted and powerful poem. Thanks for sharing.
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 19, 2011
hi macduff5 hey thanks for viewing and leaving the comment, appreciate it..
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sofa tears hidden view is such a compelling line to describe such sadness that entered the child's world.
Loves sudden end
no reason said
he just went off
no words were said
When my dad passed away, my mum cried ..yes a lot! But LOVE never ends! She never looks for anyone else to replace my dad! Love last forever even if another soul has gone to the heaven. Love remains in the heart. Both mum n me. ^_____^
these turbulent times.