Discrete

Discrete

With silver slippers
On hands and feet
crawl the path of the moon on the water
white jasmine buds in your pockets
and loneliness tucked behind your ear


No primary colors here
all silvers and purples
greys
charcoals
discrete


No need to keep reminding me of who we are
no need for your history lessons
and political treatises
its only you and me
in black and white
crawling the path of the moon on water


Do you hear the water under the glass?

In a few hours it will be daylight
And blues and greens
reds and aquas
Will assault us

In the onslaught of daylight
We will stand
And
Sink
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2011

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boyshchrm6
Nice moonlit description. Some hidden meanings
I'm sure. Smooth and Discrete. TY angel thumbs up peace
Ladybee42
This is simply elegant - nice to meet you woolfwithaview!

thumbs up handshake wave
jazzy75
Wow! Your writing is beautiful...and I just love your poem and its depth. I look forward to more of your posts :)handshake
thesunandthesea
This is just for you ( below )
rose -> rose in teeth -> flower

and this too -> hug

This also for u -> ^___________^

Total $ 1,000 Madam! Cash or Credit? LOL cool

Sorry I was kidding, they're all for free blushing and Thank you for sharing! smile Keep Smiling ))))
bouquet
gnj4u
Hi, woolfwithaview,
With white jasmine buds in your pockets, there is longing and loneliness in being Discrete. Though crawl the path of the moon on the water is a lovely image, to stand without sinking could be life's goal, with hands raised in daylight's air! Nice write!
woolfwithaview
Thanks for the comments. They are really quite generous! I was a bit shy about posting my poetry here, but now am encouraged to post more. Thank you
moonontide
You paint a true artists spirit here.Your talent with words is beautiful and I love your artwork on your profile.A warm 'Welcome here.'cheering
SCatlyn
I first read this last night after you posted, but didn't have a chance to comment(glad to see others have discovered & enjoyed it!).

Beautiful words & phrases... yet sad & thought-provoking. Great writing rose rose
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