FREE CEE!IS ABOUT TO TEACH YOU ALL HOW TO WRITE A LOVE POEM WITH SOME SUBSTANCE.....JACK AND JILL MUST HAVE LOVED EACH OTHER AND MAY EVEN HAVE WRITTEN THE SAME KIND OF SACHARINE, BANAL AND OTHERWISE THINGS THAT YOU OSTENSIBLY CATAGORIZED AS LOVE POEMS..HERE'S HOW YOU DO IT NOW...EVERYONE TRY TO STAY FOCUSED THE FOLLOWING IS ~free cee's!~ free demonstration entitled: GOOD DAY C.J. METHINKS IT BE TIME TO BLINK AT THE SUN LOOK AT YOUR LOVER AND SAY "GOOD MORNING HON" PERHAPS A CUP OF JOE AND THEN WE CAN GO GO TO THAT TREE ONLY YOU, ME AND THE PEACH TREE KNOW
THEY KNEW HOW VIBRANT AND LOVELY SHE CAN BE LOVLIER THAN THAT OLD PEACH TREE IT STANDS SO TALL WITH BIRD PERCHED INSIDE AND WHEN THEY STOP SINGING IS FOR THEM TO DECIDE
NOW PERHAPS IT'S TIME TO TAKE A LEISURELY STROLL WHILST LISTENING TO THE RADIO BLASTING ROCK AND ROLL NOW TAKE YOUR LOVER'S HAND AND WALK HIM TO THAT LAKE THE ONE THE SWANS AND MINNOWS NEVER FORSAKE
SO THEN YOU TWO GO HOME AND HE COOKS YOU BACON AND EGGS ALL THE WHILE STARING AT THE STYLE OF YOUR LITHE LITTLE LEGS THE WIFE SAYS SHE'S NOT SO TIRED ANYMORE SO SHE'S GOING OUT NOW TO DO HER SHOPPING AND A CHORE
WHILE SHE DID HER DEEDS THE HUSBAND SAT ALONE IN A PARK AND ONLY LEFT ABOUT AN HOUR AFTER DARK WHEN HE RETURNED HE SAW A MASS OF PEOPLE AND WONDERED AT WHAT THEY ALL GAPED THEN Mr. BENJAMAN PUT HIS HAND ON THE HUSBAND'S SHOULDER AND SAID "I'M AFRAID YOUR WIFE HAS BEEN RAPED" (C)2011....~free cee!~ see now, all it takes is twenty minutes, a genetically genious ability not to write tripe as most of you do when writing love poems no thanks are required but if you feel compelled to thank me for my lesson, it's okay
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 23, 2011
(First, a disclaimer: I'm just plain dumb when it comes to poetry. I'm not a poet, but enjoy reading most poetry - that is, when I'm able to comprehend it - which is probably about 70% of the time.)
I believe I understand your poems that I've read up to this point. However, there's a lot I don't understand on this one. The actual poets probably understand much of what I don't. (I could ask one of them to explain it to me, but I feel the author can best explain his own poem.)
I realize you've already given one free demonstration. While I'm not the best at understanding poetry, I am very good at spelling. (What I propose is, giving a free spelling check for the above poem. And in return, if you so choose, give a non-poetic summary of the above poem. The reason: I really like to understand the poems I read, if at all possible.) _____________________________________________________ Spelling check(in case you choose to accept said proposal):
intro: Sacharine - Saccharine, Catagorized - Categorized Poem: LOVLIER - LOVELIER BENJAMAN - BENJAMIN is the usual spelling - though possibly your way of spelling is on purpose
Btw - your spelling is fairly decent(unless you partially rely on spell-check, which is not a bad thing).
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I believe I understand your poems that I've read up to this point.
However, there's a lot I don't understand on this one. The actual poets probably understand much of what I don't. (I could ask one of them to explain it to me, but I feel the author can best explain his own poem.)
I realize you've already given one free demonstration. While I'm not the best at understanding poetry, I am very good at spelling.
(What I propose is, giving a free spelling check for the above poem. And in return, if you so choose, give a non-poetic summary of the above poem. The reason: I really like to understand the poems I read, if at all possible.)
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Spelling check(in case you choose to accept said proposal):
intro: Sacharine - Saccharine, Catagorized - Categorized
Poem: LOVLIER - LOVELIER
BENJAMAN - BENJAMIN is the usual spelling - though possibly your way of spelling is on purpose
Btw - your spelling is fairly decent(unless you partially rely on spell-check, which is not a bad thing).
Written in sincerity