~free cee!~ SAYS LISTEN UP-I AM ABOUT TO SHOW YOU

FREE CEE!IS ABOUT TO TEACH YOU ALL HOW TO WRITE A LOVE POEM WITH SOME SUBSTANCE.....JACK AND JILL MUST HAVE LOVED EACH OTHER AND MAY EVEN HAVE WRITTEN THE SAME KIND OF SACHARINE, BANAL AND OTHERWISE THINGS THAT YOU OSTENSIBLY CATAGORIZED AS LOVE POEMS..HERE'S HOW YOU DO IT NOW...EVERYONE TRY TO STAY FOCUSED
THE FOLLOWING IS ~free cee's!~ free demonstration entitled:
GOOD DAY C.J.
METHINKS IT BE TIME TO BLINK AT THE SUN
LOOK AT YOUR LOVER AND SAY "GOOD MORNING HON"
PERHAPS A CUP OF JOE AND THEN WE CAN GO
GO TO THAT TREE ONLY YOU, ME AND THE PEACH TREE KNOW

THEY KNEW HOW VIBRANT AND LOVELY SHE CAN BE
LOVLIER THAN THAT OLD PEACH TREE
IT STANDS SO TALL WITH BIRD PERCHED INSIDE
AND WHEN THEY STOP SINGING IS FOR THEM TO DECIDE

NOW PERHAPS IT'S TIME TO TAKE A LEISURELY STROLL
WHILST LISTENING TO THE RADIO BLASTING ROCK AND ROLL
NOW TAKE YOUR LOVER'S HAND AND WALK HIM TO THAT LAKE
THE ONE THE SWANS AND MINNOWS NEVER FORSAKE

SO THEN YOU TWO GO HOME AND HE COOKS YOU BACON AND EGGS
ALL THE WHILE STARING AT THE STYLE OF YOUR LITHE LITTLE LEGS
THE WIFE SAYS SHE'S NOT SO TIRED ANYMORE
SO SHE'S GOING OUT NOW TO DO HER SHOPPING AND A CHORE

WHILE SHE DID HER DEEDS THE HUSBAND SAT ALONE IN A PARK
AND ONLY LEFT ABOUT AN HOUR AFTER DARK
WHEN HE RETURNED HE SAW A MASS OF PEOPLE AND WONDERED AT WHAT THEY ALL GAPED
THEN Mr. BENJAMAN PUT HIS HAND ON THE HUSBAND'S SHOULDER AND SAID "I'M AFRAID YOUR WIFE HAS BEEN RAPED"
(C)2011....~free cee!~
see now, all it takes is twenty minutes, a genetically genious ability not to write tripe as most of you do when writing love poems
no thanks are required but if you feel compelled to thank me
for my lesson, it's okay
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
THAT WAS A LOVE POEM

Poems entered on these pages are copyrighted by the authors who entered them. They cannot be reproduced without the author's written consent. © Copyright 2001-2024. All rights reserved.

Comments (1)

SCatlyn
(First, a disclaimer: I'm just plain dumb when it comes to poetry. I'm not a poet, but enjoy reading most poetry - that is, when I'm able to comprehend it - which is probably about 70% of the time.)

I believe I understand your poems that I've read up to this point.
However, there's a lot I don't understand on this one. The actual poets probably understand much of what I don't. (I could ask one of them to explain it to me, but I feel the author can best explain his own poem.)

I realize you've already given one free demonstration. While I'm not the best at understanding poetry, I am very good at spelling.
(What I propose is, giving a free spelling check for the above poem. And in return, if you so choose, give a non-poetic summary of the above poem. The reason: I really like to understand the poems I read, if at all possible.)
_____________________________________________________
Spelling check(in case you choose to accept said proposal):

intro: Sacharine - Saccharine, Catagorized - Categorized
Poem: LOVLIER - LOVELIER
BENJAMAN - BENJAMIN is the usual spelling - though possibly your way of spelling is on purpose

Btw - your spelling is fairly decent(unless you partially rely on spell-check, which is not a bad thing).

Written in sincerity
Post Comment - Let others know what you think about this Poem
Report Abuse for this page, if inappropiate
We use cookies to ensure that you have the best experience possible on our website. Read Our Privacy Policy Here