did u know that "AWARE" rhymes with 'UN-FAIR

I HOPE YOU PEOPLE ARE PAYING ATTENTION TO HOW A GREAT POET, SUCH AS I, KEEPS THE PEOPLE'S ATTENTION, BECAUSE OFTEN WHEN I CAN'T GO TO SLEEP I LOG ON TO THIS PAGE AND THE BOREDOM OF MOST OF THE POEMS LULLS ME GENTLY TO SLEEP

TWO OF THIS BUT ONLY ONE OF THOSE

Four white wall tires and one white whale
One tuxedo and a ripped and ragged sail
Four cops, and one criminal in jail
A hundred bucks in my pocket but it’s two hundred for bail

A pair of doves and peace declared from above
A hundred eighty pushes but only one shove
Some salt on the table but assault is a whole different thing
Three thousand copper bracelets but only one real diamond ring

Steal a bit of time and steal that one real diamond ring
White picket fences and a fence that will buy almost anything
One cerulean blue sky beset by a single cloud
One silent prayer but ten million said aloud

Let me take you to wherein oppression ends
Ain’t no such place in a world of a hundred enemies and only two friends
Oppression leads to depression and depression leads to death
Now breathe deeply for the doctor and take your last sacred breath
© 2011.…~free cee!~
POETS CAN ONLY BE DECLARED POETS WHEN POETRY IS THEIR MAIN CONCERN, AND NOT JUST TO TAKE UP THE LONELY SPACES OF TIME BUT TO TRY AND MAKE YOURELF MORE PLEASANT---AIN'T NO CHANCE OF THAT HAPPENING, CUZ U AIN'T FORGIVING AND YOU AIN'T A POET....BUT THEN AGAIN, WHAT WOULD MAKE ME THINK I AM AWARE AWARE AWARE AWARE AWARE OG ANYTHING....YOURS IN BORDOM, BELEAGUERMENT AND BEASTS THAT EAT ONE'S BRAINS OUT, GOING FROM THE MADULLA OBLONGATA TO ~~free cee!~
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
i like the fact that hermit crabs come into a poetry room merely to make everyone AWARE that there is a woman, alone but who claims not to be lonely....bull! you may know her by her obviating, oblivious and obscure comments she feels compelled to leave for less than mdiocre poets. Then again, the night life in midwest Florida i'm certain is filled with poetic type people, beginning with you, if i ever see another poem of yours posted yet! (IF I AM THINKING OF YOU, NO MATTER HOW OVERWHELMINGLY HURTFUL THOSE THOUGHTS ARE, IT STILL MEANS I'M THINKING OF YOU...read any of my e-mails but for the one you could use as ammunition

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andrew149
AR butt, if you is a poet ser, then this ain't the place for you, cos this plaice is only for peepal that want's to be poets wunday....Fanks....From a published and professional poet...ie...one wot gets paid for it...lol....Kindest regards...Andrew...cool
freedumb
MY GOOD SIR...IT JUST SO HAPPENS I PROFIT MORE THAN YOU WILL IN TWO LIFETIMES....ONE NOVEL PUBLISHED BY SUBSIDIARY OF DOUBLEDAY AND ONE SELF-PUBLISHED BOOK OF MY SUPERB POETIC TALENT....HOW I MAKE OUT BEST IS GETTING THESE SELF-PITYING, SELF-RIGHTEOUS AND SELF-SERVING LADIE TO HEAR ONE OF MY POEMS, SE A YOUTHFUL AND VITAL 63YEAR OLD, THEY E-MAIL ME AND IF I DEEM IT SO SHE GETS TO HOUSE ME, FEED ME AND BUY "ANYTHING THAT GETS ME THROUGH THE NIGHT" UNTIL I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF HER NAGGING, THEN I MIGHT JUST CHAT UP A CHICK IN A BAR, AND DURING CASUAL CONVERSATION DROP THE WORDS "OH YES, AND i'M A NOVELIST AND A POET...I COULD GET MY PORTFOLIO AND BRING IT UP TO YOUR PLACE (UNTIL I BORE OF HER NAGGING... I'M NOT A GIGGLO, I'M NOT A LOTHARIO, I'M JUST A MAN WHO WALKS, TALKS AND DOES A FEW OTHER THINGS THESE OLDER LADIES CRAVE FROM A BAD BOY LIKE ME...I DO THAT, HAVING HAD MY "VITAMINS" I CAN BEAT A TWENTY-FIVE YEAR OLD BY AN HOUR---THAT SIR, IS CALLED PROFITING FROM POETRY FONDLY, YOURS IN FRIENDSHIP ~free!~
andrew149
Nice one!...yours in....Etc....wave wave, bow, salute and cringe...devil cheers
jazzy75
This verse really stands out for me:

Steal a bit of time and steal that one real diamond ring
White picket fences and a fence that will buy almost anything
One cerulean blue sky beset by a single cloud
One silent prayer but ten million said aloud

Powerful Free!cool
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