Blanket of night
falls on her shoulders
dreams wait upon her
as softly she sleeps
There in the dreamshop
they lie awaiting
for stardust to touch
and breathe in her dream
Dream comes to life
like little toy soldiers
coming to life
in the night hour
Sinks deep inside
invades her subconscious
dreams will meet dreamer
the courtship begins
Waltzing on venus
with a sweet lover
walk on the moon
overshadow the earth
Wearing a gown
blue as the starlight
skipping the planets
in shadows she runs
Such is the world
of dreamers and shadows
moonbeams and people
born in the night
Comments
Ladyjj east, Norfolk, England UK
Tue Aug 24, 2010 9:34 PM WET
How lovely.. "For stardust to touch, and breathe in her dream"..
Dreams soft full of hope..
Thankyou Serpico Ljj
Happygolucky4u Treasure Coast, Florida USA
Tue Aug 24, 2010 10:05 PM WET
"dreams wait upon her as softly she sleeps" Awwww those ever patiently waiting dreams. Lovely write agoodguy2have suffolk, Virginia USA
Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:36 AM WET
serpico, a vision filled solar system dream of the perfect lover.
Comments (7)
Beautiful, exquisite writing - so soothing to read
hi ladyjj, thank you for your thoughtful comments as you observed the poem..
hi happygolucky4u, thank you too for your compliments on my work..
hi goodguy and thank you also for such words of approval on the poem...
thank you all....
CJ