Comments caroljoyce Manchester, Greater Manchester, England UK Thu Aug 26, 2010 1:37 PM WET Very good indeed, more words would simply be superfluous.Message 'felt'.
hi carol and thank you again for your complimentary reply, appreciated as always..
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKMar 11, 2011
Fantastic cinquain on "shyness". I've certainly been able to relate to these words at times.
Just love "Remove the thorns from the rose"... in my mind I picture the thorns as bruising the petals -thorns that come from being shy- (though I know they're actually on the stem... and you mean it in a slightly different way) ..... Beautiful
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKMar 11, 2011
aww thank you very much again scatlyn, so kind of you to put such positive and inspiring comments re my poems...thank you so much..
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niah9Auckland, New ZealandMar 11, 2011
Oh...shyness...says it all Christian....Niah
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKMar 11, 2011
hi and thank you niah, yes i agree, its a painful arena..locked in ones self not able to find a way out. but key is to get ones eyes of oneself, see others instead...
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Just love "Remove the thorns from the rose"... in my mind I picture the thorns as bruising the petals -thorns that come from being shy- (though I know they're actually on the stem... and you mean it in a slightly different way)
..... Beautiful