Shyness

Shyness

Painful Bruising

Misunderstood Alone Wishing

Remove the thorns from the rose

Shyness



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caroljoyce Manchester, Greater Manchester, England UK
Thu Aug 26, 2010 1:37 PM WET
Very good indeed, more words would simply be superfluous.Message 'felt'.

hi carol and thank you again for your complimentary reply, appreciated as always..wave
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SCatlyn
Fantastic cinquain on "shyness". I've certainly been able to relate to these words at times.

Just love "Remove the thorns from the rose"... in my mind I picture the thorns as bruising the petals -thorns that come from being shy- (though I know they're actually on the stem... and you mean it in a slightly different way)
..... Beautiful rose
christian22
aww thank you very much again scatlyn, so kind of you to put such positive and inspiring comments re my poems...thank you so much..wine wave
niah9online today!
Oh...shyness...says it all Christian....Niahteddybear peace
christian22
hi and thank you niah, yes i agree, its a painful arena..locked in ones self not able to find a way out. but key is to get ones eyes of oneself, see others instead...
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