Dawn has opened up

Dawn has opened up
the shop of life again
sunshine or maybe rain
who can tell

Stirring, believing, and hoping
rising awake to each day
shaking the dreams
as the moonbeams fly away

Walking through time
reasons that rhyme
mountains of problems
assail and to climb

School of life
we are in
life time members
the class begins

Win or lose
stand or fall
give it your best
on heaven call

You are not weak
to call on God
he is a friend
more than we know

Impossible things
we give to him
all of the rest
is ours to do

Valleys and mountains
symbolize journeys
all of us moving
on pathways we choose

There is a peace
we can obtain
when in the storms
or going through rain

Call upon me
i will answer to you
this is the promise
of faith that is true

So in the journey
that call we can make
finding a friend
who will never forsake
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2011

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SCatlyn
Wow... wonderful poem!

"..the shop of life, sunshine or maybe rain, who can tell", "...school of life, lifetime members stand or fall, give it your best, on heaven call", "valleys & mountains symbolize journeys..."

Guess I better stop there, before I copy the whole poem - great write thumbs up
niah9
Dawn and journey through life....it shows the other side of the world is heading towards spring.....Niahcheering peace
SCatlyn
Yes, spring!(if we could only do it w/o the fires & tornadoes here... but thankful to not have the devastating earthquakes - hope things are improving in N.Z., Niah)

... guess it's "the storms or going through rain" part. Inspirational write, as well as wonderful, Christian thumbs up
christian22
wine wave well had to do this scatlyn on your two comments for this poem, thank you so much it means a lot to see this kind of poem climb and let people view it..your words are so very generous, so kind and great to encourage any writer, i will have to put you on my staff..rolling on the floor laughing
christian22
thank you niah9 for popping in to view this too..appreciate it..wave
SCatlyn
A job on the staff? - professor ......I'll take it! laugh
(If the staff ever gives advice, here's some: keep up the great writing thumbs up)
christian22
well now that is a sound reply and consider yourself employed, and the advice is always welcome and that piece is guarenteed to be followed thru...thanks scatlyn, the latest team member of 1...appreciate your comments, as always.wave wine
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