SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKMar 11, 2011
Wow... wonderful poem!
"..the shop of life, sunshine or maybe rain, who can tell", "...school of life, lifetime members stand or fall, give it your best, on heaven call", "valleys & mountains symbolize journeys..."
Guess I better stop there, before I copy the whole poem - great write
niah9Auckland, New ZealandMar 11, 2011
Dawn and journey through life....it shows the other side of the world is heading towards spring.....Niah
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKMar 12, 2011
Yes, spring!(if we could only do it w/o the fires & tornadoes here... but thankful to not have the devastating earthquakes - hope things are improving in N.Z., Niah)
... guess it's "the storms or going through rain" part. Inspirational write, as well as wonderful, Christian
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKMar 12, 2011
well had to do this scatlyn on your two comments for this poem, thank you so much it means a lot to see this kind of poem climb and let people view it..your words are so very generous, so kind and great to encourage any writer, i will have to put you on my staff..
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKMar 12, 2011
thank you niah9 for popping in to view this too..appreciate it..
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKMar 13, 2011
A job on the staff? - ......I'll take it! (If the staff ever gives advice, here's some: keep up the great writing )
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKMar 13, 2011
well now that is a sound reply and consider yourself employed, and the advice is always welcome and that piece is guarenteed to be followed thru...thanks scatlyn, the latest team member of 1...appreciate your comments, as always.
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"..the shop of life, sunshine or maybe rain, who can tell", "...school of life, lifetime members stand or fall, give it your best, on heaven call", "valleys & mountains symbolize journeys..."
Guess I better stop there, before I copy the whole poem - great write
... guess it's "the storms or going through rain" part. Inspirational write, as well as wonderful, Christian
(If the staff ever gives advice, here's some: keep up the great writing )