When Life is Hard

When life is hard
and the road is long
and weariness comes in
blue monday mornings
or hum drum days
may it be we could
offer up a prayer
after all there is
somebody there.

Say a prayer
let heaven know
all the things
that touch you below.

You may see
you may find
that you were
on his mind.


Comments


caroljoyce Manchester, Greater Manchester, England UK
Mon Sep 27, 2010 10:20 PM WET
Nicely put, Serpio,
CJ
angel

serpico12 cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UK
hi carol, thank you for saying that..


Gashly Amish Hell, Ohio USA
Tue Sep 28, 2010 3:34 AM WET
to share a line from a song, if i may: i still believe in god, but god no longer believes in me. it's a slippery edge, serpico, knowing and thinking and believing. but it's a beautiful write, nonetheless, as usual.

serpico12 cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UK
Tue Sep 28, 2010 12:24 PM WET
gashly thank you for your comments may i just say..he believes in you more than you know..not always easy to get i know..hope you find him again..


niah9 Hokianga: Far North., Northland New Zealand
Mon Feb 14, 2011 6:20 AM WET
I sometimes wonder how we do cope in those times when life throws so many curved balls at once...faith and hope helps, and belief in oneself, though sometimes it's hard...I often think of those miners who walked from Wales to the NE of England, then down to London....they never gave up...some came to NZ....The promised land....Niah cool bouquet


serpico12 cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UK
Mon Feb 14, 2011 1:45 PM WET
yes niah, its just lifes cycle, man was born for trouble as the sparks flyupwards, as it says in the bible book of job...but maybe all our lifes learning and inner hope and faith do help us, i like to think so...trials also make people, not easy though..thanks niah ...
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Posted: Mar 2011
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Comments (2)

SCatlyn
Wonderful, encouraging poem, love it!! happy place
christian22
hi there scatlyn hey my friend so kind as always to mark out my poems with your approval and pleasure, always your thoughts are valued..bouquet
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