A Ship Set Asail

My life as you can tell
is not as perfect as it can be
so i throw a penny down the well
to see if fate will help me

But the door will close in my face
my dreams may not come true
i'll get confined to this tiny space
so i look up to the sky; to you

My dreams take me to a place far away
to sail far and wide
and i am free for just a single day
but then i had to run and hide

my ship crashed into the sandy shore
and carried me back to reality
my life has beenthrown to the floor
but my writing brought it back to me
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Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
This is a poem that i have an EDITORS CHOICE AWARD for and wanted to know what people thought about it really... so just let me know please

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trurorob
Amanda09
Its a lovely theme, as an opinion, which I think you wanted, I would say that just a bit more thought the way you phrase the words, but still a very nice theme
Rob
gypsyheart
10 people would have written 10 different thoughts on this theme.Each one expressing his own experiences,thoughts & wishes.You have great writing ability amanda09hug teddybear
amanda09
thank you for the inputspeace
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