Rejected imperfection

I thought i loved you
now i see
you choose her over me

you love her
yeah this i know
I thought you loved me- so. so! so?

i've noticed now
that loves rejection
is just flaws nd imprefction

so now you tell me;
am i just rejected imperfection?
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Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
just another one i wrote when i was feeling down. how is it??

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Comments (1)

gypsyheart
I love your punctuation,exclamation and questionmark at all the so's...it tells a lot.Clever way of using it.Very well written poem amandahug
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