Can you feel the wind blowing on your face as the world turns it can forget where you are
Standing in no mans land its a silent lonely place
Lovely poem.
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAApr 3, 2011
'Problems are doorways..' Great poem christian. I guess we all fear those doorways as enemys sometimes, instead as friends opening the way the deeper fulfilment. Much to think about.
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 5, 2011
hi odette, thanks so much for your approving words on this poem
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 5, 2011
hi kickit22 well you can be sure it not the edge of the world..lol..as we need to find peace and contentment where our feet touch the ground..thanks
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 5, 2011
hi cafe..well that thought on problems and doorways was not mine, i heard it..but it fitted into the general theme...thanks for your input..appreciated..
IntelligentsiaValencia, SpainApr 5, 2011
I often found that resolving a problomatic issue sometimes led to others, peace of mind must rely upon yourself, but I feel where you are going with this piece.
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 5, 2011
hi inteligentsia, you got a good point..some things are not so easy, your point is well taken..thanks
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 6, 2011
Felt some of the anxieties at the beginning, but became more & more hopeful as I reached the end. Great, encouraging write!
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 6, 2011
hi there scatlyn, hey thank you once again, glad you found the latter part a pick up..thanks so much...
Though standing on no man's land, in a silent lonely place, quite alone in fact, we shall not despair and ... carry on, yes you are right, carry on and face problems we encounter courageously, knowing, with His help up above we will make it.
christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKMay 13, 2011
hi marika..thanks for your comments, yes we have to just that..
Comments (11)
blowing on your face
as the world turns
it can forget where you are
Standing in no mans land
its a silent lonely place
Lovely poem.
Great, encouraging write!