Keep on Trucking

by Unknown

Apr 2011 444 Views 12 comments

Keep on Trucking

Author: Unknown

Keep on trucking
so many faces
i got to see
hitching a ride
people and places

keep on trucking
city to city
chasing my self
down again
in the pouring rain

keep on trucking
right into dreamsville
where love
is surely waiting
wanderin man and home again

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Posted: Apr 2011

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schawalskiCork, IrelandApr 8, 2011

dreamsville is a place I could live in christian

christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 8, 2011

hi schwalski, yes know the feeling sometimes..thanks for the comment..

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 9, 2011

Aww... well, I believe "love is surely waiting"... and not just in "dreamsville", but in realville

Love the poem! Has a great flow to it...

christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 9, 2011

hi scatlyn hey you put a good point to, a new location realsville, lived a lot of years there, but got your meaning..you can't live in a dream. thanks my friend

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeApr 9, 2011

@christian sir,,,may this truck leads you home to where home is,,,another poignant write sir...thanks..jacquie

vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaApr 10, 2011

I liked your so much that I had to visit your profile. I don't do it often. Thanks for sharing.

vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaApr 10, 2011

Ooopss...

I liked your poem so much that I had to visit your profile. I don't do it often. Thanks for sharing.

christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 10, 2011

hi jeddah and thanks for that nice thought, may it be the same for you also, and for viewing and commenting..thanks

christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 10, 2011

hi vyoleta well i appreciate that you took time to view and comment on the poem, glad you liked it..thanks

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaApr 10, 2011

Love your first verse especially.Your poem reminds me of myself.

christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 10, 2011

hi gypsyheart, thanks for that comment, guess lots of us can identify with verse one.

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAApr 10, 2011

This touches home on a number of levels Mr. Christian. I'm used to the green background in your poems. I'm getting used to calling them the 'Green Poems'.lol. Will you be going through a red, and blue period like the great artist we all know? Your poems..right to the heart.