Clarity seems to be far from here Decades of innocence fall from me My last breath falls near Disaster sums up the world as it is Hate the breed of existence
Deception in my mind's eye The fury of beating hearts dies down Enter the dream world One of desolation Silence as cold as stone
The beast destroyed my empty will Left nothing but burnt cinder ashes
Charity is all I'm in it for Timeless sequence we all share Broken reflection Endless illusions of hope Emotions overpowering the soul
Swimming in fantasy dreams The magic is gone My veins are about to burst Silent tears, fruitful memories Nothing left to say
The beast destroyed ny empty will Left nothing but burt cinder ashes
My final eternity my final dawn Bid the world farewell
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Posted: Apr 2011
About this poem:
I wrote this after I split up with my ex... this is one of the few I wrote..
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaApr 9, 2011
La Luna..I think you get too down on yourself and too negative. Be positive...step back..take things in perspective. I for one think your poetry is terrific...so much passion there. You have so much to offer and if you get knocked down get back up...you are strong.
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