Baby ... Move

You can hang 'round worrying
in that closet of doom.
Or you can stick your foot out
get a feel for your room.
See the sun through the window
in casting light across gloom.

Baby ... move.

You can be happy and live life
in all of your days.
Or you can hang onto your trials
And those immovable ways.
But you know the sun shines brightest
on those who step into it's rays.

Baby ... move.

Don't get emotional,
You'll cry an ocean you'll,
Be in love you'll see.

Don't get too personal,
Superficial person you'll,
Fall into love that you'll be.

Don't get emotional,
A sail on the ocean you'll,
Empty into the sea.

Baby ... move.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2011

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Comments (15)

Swan87
I liked your Writing Style ! I liked the words !

Keep goin !wine

Swan
BB_snickers
Thank you! .. These are lyrics. listen to music
BB_snickers
uh oh Hopefully you have a partner for that. wine


Thanks. bouquet tip hat
daciana1
well..i have, but i still enjoy your poem, gosh " baby ...move" blushing Thank you for sharing it! hug
BB_snickers
That's great D! ... Congrats!

They are actually lyrics, for a song I wrote
I can sing it
note for note
Don't worry
Be slappy... giggle


grin banana
daciana1
Thank you BB, cheering hahaha don't tricky me, with your voice grin
mike7375
Really nice style and positive feel...cool poem! thumbs up
BB_snickers
Thank you Mike. bowing wine
beautifulyou
BB, your poem is really good

I hear it as a song daisy
BB_snickers
In F# ....
d4nI314
Oh how I'd love to hear you singing it?

The first verse reminds me a bit about Leonard Cohen's style.

Do you play the guitar?

D wave
BB_snickers
Thanks.

I can tinker on a guitar. I prefer drums. tip hat
Oceanzest
yeah totally new style, great comeback from earlier posting, lyrics are fun. applause
EXRED3
Yep i enjoyed and could here the drums to the beat of the ocean grin

Keep smiling
BB_snickers
Thanks Ocean and Exred . smile
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