I'd Only Just Surrendered

You know.
How you drop by,
throwing smiles.
A tickle of yearn.
With passion to burn.

Sometimes.
When you're gone,
out of my mind,
I'd surrender to forgetting and,
the memories stop fretting.

Every time.
Most not expected,
when we're disconnected,
you see what you're missing
with dreams that are blissing.

Repeatedly.
And I'd only just surrendered
to things I'd remembered.
Those times you arise,
then wave your goodbyes.

Only to return,
eternally.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2022
About this poem:
This is about the reality that people never really leave you. They always return, either in mind or the master illusion.

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EXRED3
so true your poem thumbs up
lindsyjonesonline today!
BB, I'm glad you posted it on here, too.
A true account of how we're always reminded of what was.wave
BB_snickers
Thanks exred wave

Lindsy ... I think when look for the happiness in the past, then memories or returning people can be seen with some joy. Sometimes forgiveness is useful.wine
southmiami4321online today!
Yes BB, we oldies are blessed for still having our past memories. Nice poem.Thanks for sharing. SMwave
lindsyjonesonline today!
Absolutely BB. We're born flawed. We're made to make mistakes sometimes deliberately and unconsciously, forgiveness is part of our lives.

But some people are hell bent to be unforgiving. Move on. Great poem BB

Can you please bump your thread on " love doesn't ask for anything" on the forum?
BB_snickers
Hi Lindsy,


Thanks,

I think you are able to bump threads as well. grin
lindsyjonesonline today!
Yes but I can't locate it. If you go to your thread it's much faster. wave that's a very good thread BB.
BB_snickers
OH, well, you go to poster's profile, scroll down and you'll see "threads" and other links to the OP's threads. and posts

It's what I have to do as well. gift
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