As we look up into the heavens What do we all see W e see a blue that,s limitless Its beauty oh so free, We see the clouds come scuttering as light as feathering foam Some are filled with heaviness and sometimes they cry through But isnt there a message there From Gods true love above Are not the clouds, but just thin air No ceilings up above Its all how we percieve these clouds That hover in our heads We think that they are ceilings that keep us feeling dead. But God in all his wisdom has given us to see a sky of love thats limitless and we can sail through free.
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
Inspired by Pilgrimageoflove, poem "Is it" anf Swades Poem "The poisonous Power of lust" Both these poems speak to me and we all can be free We just need to lift a our chins and see.
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJun 5, 2011
Well written Petal, I thought that Pilgrims poem might have something to do with it ....lol......thankyou....Andrew...xxx
swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAJun 5, 2011
Wow!!! What a BEAUTIFUL poem!!! After this acknowledgment of being inspired partially by my poem, I almost feel obligated to keep that title without changing it anymore.
FANTASTIC write petalblossoms!! And thanks for the credit of my poem being an inspiration!!
Comments (8)
FANTASTIC write petalblossoms!! And thanks for the credit of my poem being an inspiration!!
That hover in our heads" is one high-minded piece of wisdom. ;-)
rob
Best wishes
Bill
limitless
and we can sail through free"
Just beautiful!
Thanks for the credit.