Ceilings

As we look up into the heavens
What do we all see
W e see a blue that,s limitless
Its beauty oh so free,
We see the clouds come scuttering
as light as feathering foam
Some are filled with heaviness
and sometimes they cry through
But isnt there a message there
From Gods true love above
Are not the clouds, but just thin air
No ceilings up above
Its all how we percieve these clouds
That hover in our heads
We think that they are ceilings that keep us feeling dead.
But God in all his wisdom has given us to see
a sky of love thats
limitless
and we can sail through free.
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Posted: Jun 2011
About this poem:
Inspired by Pilgrimageoflove, poem "Is it"
anf Swades Poem "The poisonous Power of lust"
Both these poems speak to me and we all can be free
We just need to lift a our chins and see.

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andrew149
Well written Petal, I thought that Pilgrims poem might have something to do with it ....lol......thankyou....Andrew...xxxcool
swade777
Wow!!! What a BEAUTIFUL poem!!! After this acknowledgment of being inspired partially by my poem, I almost feel obligated to keep that title without changing it anymore.

FANTASTIC write petalblossoms!! And thanks for the credit of my poem being an inspiration!!
agoodguy2have
petalblossoms, "Its all how we percieve these clouds
That hover in our heads" is one high-minded piece of wisdom. ;-)
newboyseeksgirl
Very powerful pen you have there,you make my clouds disappearwave
trurorob
Unfortunately I have no Gods of any nature, but you make a lovely point and its a nice soft poem if I may call it that.
rob
Fellsman
Dreamy relaxing narrative Petalblossoms, full of hope and optimism...

Best wishes

Bill hug hug
jazzy75
Inspiring poem petalblossoms!! Those ceilings we treasure sure do place their limits...and are all self imposed :)hug
pilgrimageoflove
"a sky of love thats
limitless
and we can sail through free"

Just beautiful!

Thanks for the credit.


teddybear
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