oh....

You...
You are a man who took everythig from me
you took my love and my body
i gave it for just one reason
i love you

oh..no..
Look at me....!!!!!!!!!!
You already gone
You have another girl now..
You screw me like i never exist
oh noooooo....
You break my heart


i was believe you
i already given you all
why you have to go?
No one thing i did wrong

what should i tell them?
Oh love... Take me away
bring me to alive that i should be
Oh...the tears on my face
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Posted: Aug 2011
About this poem:
Just dissapointed

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cafetwo2010
so sad sweet..hope the tears become rivers of joy..innocent crying
Poetnumber1
Dear Lorind
Its as if i felt your pain in this piece,its so sad a thing how some men treat women like a piece of trash,i hope you gain the strength to carry on,i enjoyed reading this...Best wishes to you.

Yours Sincerely
PN1 bouquet
lorentz
just disapointed..oh..
Lavender_Blue
Dear Lorind

Dry your lovely eyes, someone so kind and sensitive deserves a lot more than he could give you...

Be kind to yourself.


LB
purple heart
lorind
i love writing
i get some inspirations and opinions from people who had read it..

The poem was sad and dissapoited. And now i am thankful cos i can past it and ready
for something new and sometging that could make me down or up.

And now i got it from you. Thanks so much..
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