Oh,mind, such wisdom has builded you, but where is your house? Do you dwell in stone palaces where servants answer your beckon call Are you the midnight phantom whose voice whispers through the evergreens Can your thoughts be found grazing among pastures of golden grain Perhaps your sacred dwelling cannot be approached by a simple act of will Look into your face to intently and you cannot be seen Me thinks you are a child of eternity yet you are not to be worshiped but devotion must be delivered to the one who assembled your thoughts and set them within the red earth to florish Oh, mind many have sought your dwelling and were lost to themselves But be that as it may for you are born of nobler stuff holding worlds in the palm of your hand, and yet you oh, mind.. hide in the spirit of life~
A very intently written poem.. hide in the spirit of life... interesting these words.. the mind is hidden in the very essence of life..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 4, 2011
Ty marikia..' Like the teacher you are you have disected and put in chronological order the true logic and meaning of this poem..I think I've given an explanation of the mind which might appear abstract yet describes its trancendent nature rather concretely..It's a challendge writing of the mind which I want to do more of and more exhaustively because its like trying to describe the taste of water..lol.
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