Remember when you where a kid? As soon as you got five cents you where off to the candy store to get a piece o sweets. Well guess what I figured out. Once I grew up I became part of the sweets that one would find in the GROWN-UP CANDY STORE. The sweets changed yet the concept stayed the same.
NOW YOU HAVE MAN AND WOMAN:
MAN = FIVE CENT
WOMAN = SWEETS
ONCE MAN GET'S FIVE CENTS HE WANT'S AS MUCH SWEET'S AS HE CAN GET NOW HE IS THE FIVE CENT'S
SWEETS IS THE WOMAN AND SHE WILLING TO GIVE OF HERSELF WITH NO REGRETS,HOWEVER FIVE CENTS HAS OTHER PLANS.HE KNOWS THAT HE CAN GET SEVERAL PIECES OF SWEETS IF ONLY HE HAD MORE. HE USES HIS CHARM ON HIS FIRST PIECE OF SWEETS SO THAT SHE WOULD BELIEVE THAT SHE IS THE ONLY PIECE THAT HE HAS.YET I KNOW BETTER THEN TO BELIEVE THAT I'M THE ONLY PIECE THAT HE HAS.BECAUSE FIVE CENTS HAS LESS TIME TO SPEND WITH ME LET ALONE CALL LIKE WHEN HE ONLY HAD FIVE CENTS.WELL NOW HE HAS FIFTEEN CENTS MORE.HE RUNS BACK TO THE CANDY STORE FOR MORE. NOW THAT MR.FIVE CENT IS MR.FIFTEEN CENT HE WILL NEVER SEE THAT THAT FIRST PIECE OF SWEETS HE BOUGHT WITH HIS FIVE CENTS WAS THE BEST HE WOULD EVER HAVE IN HIS LIFETIME.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 6, 2011
Good...interesting piece of writing,i never saw writing with this concept before,despite you used money and sweets to get a message across,i thought it was a well detailed and valuable message,thanks for sharing what was on your mind
brid523OPbuffalo, New York USASep 6, 2011
Your welcome poetnumber1 and thanks for your thoughts.
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