I follow love down the rock mountain Across the rippling river tide Silent on needled carpet, through the forest pine Sure footed, taught by trust, nothing but My love to guide me least I fall Though the way I know by heart this time
The Prince of Procreation welcomes me I bow my head, place cheek to staff Pausing to breath earth and listening hear You moan somewhere up above as I move to the underside, arrive lost again In fields of downy wool, spun to soft cashmere
Hi, leigh2154, I follow love down the rock mountain... Though a feeling of melancholy touches the heart, it is overshadowed by the hope of Sure footed, taught by trust, nothing but My love to guide me least I fall. I thank you for sharing Pausing to breath earth and listening hear...
leigh2154OPCrossville, Tennessee USASep 22, 2011
Bill...Don't blush, it is passion born of true love...It is living ones life willingly...
Hi,, I love your style of writing, and I love this poem.. your imagery is amazing.. by the way I used to live in Crossville for a time, and then Nashville.. beautiful country down there..
leigh2154OPCrossville, Tennessee USASep 22, 2011
Hi Stormy! What a beautiful compliment, thank you!!...Yes, TN is beautiful country, inspiring! I have lived here for eight years, originally from Ohio...So nice to meet you!!
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Excellent writing,
LB
Imaginative use of metaphor, and a gentle relaxing stroll for all who read this...
Best wishes
Bill
Ha ha, I blush L'amore é universale...
Bill
I follow love down the rock mountain... Though a feeling of melancholy touches the heart, it is overshadowed by the hope of Sure footed, taught by trust, nothing but My love to guide me least I fall. I thank you for sharing Pausing to breath earth and listening hear...