it is not me

It’s not me
Who makes coffee
In your kitchen
In the morning

And coffee aroma
Wakes you up
Stretching softly
Like a bear

After night scent of
Mint
Wild thyme
And lavender
Still sleepy
You dream
Slowly


Because
I do not have
Belle body
Or young d’esprit
I am not a mixture
Neither elegance and simplicity
Nor fantasy and humor

And carpe diem
I know
Only from books

So now
It is not me
Who goes to you

Sweet fruit
Pick it up only
And taste It
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Posted: Oct 2011

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Fellsman
Hi halakala


This would appear to be your first poem on here, and you have got off to a great start with this... You make great use of analogy and metaphor in this poem. An enjoyable read.


Best wishes

Bill wine
halakala
Bill...

once agin,thank you very much:)
Volcano_21
goodapplause cheering
Poetnumber1
Hi Halakala,i enjoyed reading this lovely piece of writing,thanks for sharingapplause M.Mbouquet
Poetnumber1
Hi again,very rude of me to forget, ''Welcome To Poets Corner''wine
halakala
Hello POET...

thank you very very much:)
It is very nice that you have noticed my 'modest' poem
It is my 'first time' and I am happy to join here:)

P.S.I have to look at yours...:)
vyoleta
Welcome, halakala. I like your poem written from your sincerest feelings, put in a beautiful form and style. I see that we are going to have great reads from you. Congrats.

handshake
halakala
Thank you very much YvIOLETa,

by the way, I have written this poem when I fell in love with some amazing Frenchman...
Odette67
Excellent first poem on CS. applause
cafetwo2010
Super sweet and lovely. A beautiful easy flow. Please write many more of such..angel
CloudySky
Very nice write. Look forward to reading more. wine
halakala
Odette..thank you very much...
I have to look at yours,
but it takes time to analyse them..the contents/meaning /,poetical figures and so on..I know something about it because of my university profession...
halakala
Cafetwo..thank you very much for your comments:)
As a poet,you know,how difficult is to write a good poem...
halakala
Cloudy..thank you too:)
it is important to have nice applause for the first time:)
I do appreciate it:)
boyshchrm6
Welcome to the corner Halakala. An intriguing write.
handshake comfort cool angel thumbs up
pilgrimageoflove
It is not me
Who goes to you
Sweet fruit
Pick it up only
And taste It

I love it.
Welcome
Ayhra
Very nice to read halakala, hope to read more from you applause bouquet cheering
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