Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaOct 6, 2011
Hi Halakala,
I was attracted to your title but I'm impressed by the simplicity and power of your words.
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 6, 2011
Wonderful,creative,and much much more..
halakalaOPkatowice, Silesia PolandOct 6, 2011
Thank you but..I am afraid if you understand. My main problem is how to translate it into English correctly,and still retain thought and style together in a similar form like in my native language:)
AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaOct 6, 2011
Well done halaka, thank you for sharing this translation
Thank you for your comments. When one of Polish poets,Wislawa Szymborska,got her Nobel Pirize in Literature/poetry/ some critics said sarcastically"She just had a good English translator",so...you know:)
MycallingCork, IrelandOct 6, 2011
Hi Halakala, I like your poem, very powerful and interesting style
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 6, 2011
Hi Halakala,this is first time i'm reading your poem and i think its lovely,thanks for sharing M.M
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I was attracted to your title but I'm impressed by the simplicity and power of your words.
My main problem is how to translate it into English correctly,and still retain thought and style together in a similar form like in my native language:)
Thank you for your comments.
When one of Polish poets,Wislawa Szymborska,got her Nobel Pirize in Literature/poetry/ some critics said sarcastically"She just had a good English translator",so...you know:)