to be the scent of your instants, to be the smooth of your mood, eternal beginning of the end.. to be music of your senses, to be caress of your hands.. every morning,soothing your south, hours of eve,playing your mouth.. to be yours, heavenly blue,the limit, to be yours,eden, green bubble lime.. voyage beyond the incandescent, passion turning to enlightment.. to be yours,prohibited fire, to be yours,promised desire.. the "I"of the letter, the"mine"of the later..
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Posted: Oct 2011
About this poem:
coming back from halifax,I felt asleep in the van(I was not the driver!)and words came in my mind like a symphony..
vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaOct 16, 2011
Lorentz, this is a real music of words, a symphony, as you said. It keeps echoing after the readng is finished. You do deserve the lady to which the poem is devoted, or who inspired it. And she should be happy to be yours, too.
Maxeen_1YORK, North Yorkshire, England UKOct 16, 2011
Lorentz.. wonderful write:: Definitely..a lyrical symphony of loves music for the soul,
lorentzOPhalifax, Nova Scotia CanadaOct 16, 2011
thanx my ladies,sisters in words symphony.. a gentle far away muse inspires me..
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Definitely..a lyrical symphony of
loves music for the soul,
a gentle far away muse inspires me..