waves...

waves always dying in the sand,
one other coming and vanishing..
low tide,sweeping away,
hopes and happiness..
love and death,
at the end of the path,
meeting up..
waves have no memories,
waves have no compassion..
are we,only,
this bitter drop,
among tears,
dressing the ocean?
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
depths and ever..

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niah9
well said...and visual...so true too...Kathyyay
pincitas39
Nice comparison of souls with the waves dying in the sand...
Just beautiful!...Lorentz
Thanks to share your talent

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Maxeen_1
waves...
by: lorentz

are we,only,
this bitter drop,
among tears,
dressing the ocean?

deep food for thought write
your words loretzthumbs up gift professor
lorentz
thanks for your gentle appreciations..just simple words depicting
a feeling..time flying away..
Ayhra
I like this Lorentz, thank you for sharing handshakebouquet
lucy777
very nice write Lorentzhandshake
deeprootlove
thanks for sharing this useful one with us
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