Starving for a bit of bread? Or starving for a bit of love? Lonely and no one there to wipe your tears and comfort your fears. .. Dying for a hug? Crying to have a friend? But no one to see you die and no one to hear you cry. ..
Where is all the millions of people on this lonely earth? Where is all the millions of people to love such a lonely soul? No one but yourself. .. And a million others walking pass with out giving a notice. Screaming deep from with in and no one to reply, just your lonely self to observe and to witness. ..
My friend. .. the only cure for loneliness is loneliness itself. .. Journey well
Loneliness is sometimes an inability to sacrifice yourself
MycallingCork, IrelandOct 27, 2011
Thanks for posting Soulvirus, really like your poem and nothing wrong with your English by the way
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKOct 27, 2011
I agree with Mycalling.. Your English is excellent! and a lovely poem.... The main key that hit me are these two lines....
Where is all the millions of people to love such a lonely soul? No one but yourself. ..
Such true words..to love oneself..if not.. others cannot reach through that barrier until we let it down..
Thankyou for sharing
soulvirusOPhamilton, Waikato New ZealandOct 27, 2011
Thanks to everyone for all the great comments. I did not expect the public would have such an emotional response to my poem. Also I was inspired by my poem to write a short music piece to compliment the poem. , Will upload soon
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nice poem soul and how very true
Deeply compassionate write written from the"soul"
thankyou for sharing
The main key that hit me are these two lines....
Where is all the millions of people to love such a lonely soul?
No one but yourself. ..
Such true words..to love oneself..if not.. others cannot reach through that barrier until we let it down..
Thankyou for sharing
no one but yourself... "
I really like that line, good work Soulvirus