Heavens door

Today I learned you are seeing someone
It's now that I wish I was dead and gone
For I love you like no one ever before
Now I'm  wishing I was at heavens door 
Banging and kicking, trying to get in
Perhaps I shouldn't be here after all my sin
If there is a God, I thought he'd forgive
Or maybe he has that's why he's letting me live
But why let me live with all this pain
Maybe one day I'll be at deaths door once again
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Posted: Nov 2011
About this poem:
Wrote this after learning my ex of ten years has moved on!

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Comments (6)

Ayhra
Some times is hard to deal with the moment... Thank you for sharing this poem. My best wishes handshake
lucy777
Hang in there Luke every day it will get a tad less painful,Keep writing you are extremely good at expressing yourself teddybear
Yankee4you
Yo have done well to describe how this feels....very well...
spiritbabe1210
comfort I know how you feel, even though we never forget, we learn to live with it!
What doesnt kill us only makes us stronger... The pain we all feel makes us all what we are today.. Dont ever give up, when one door closes another opens, oh and dont stand staring at that door thats closed or you may miss whats in front of you.
Stay strong, take care hug
Luke82
Thank you for your comments, It means a lot to me that others can appreciate how I'm feeling and I'm very grateful for the opportunity to share my poetry xx
Odette67
If we never know sorrow..how will we know joy..the pain you feel is real..but nothing in this world lasts. purple heart
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