Complete moment

The light spills onto the floor
the large window open to capture the soul of the sun.

A breeze blows in and lifts my hair slightly, kisses my cheek,
and my mind closes off and becomes still.

My eyes close and I hear the sound of the world rushing by,
and as I open my eyes a soft butterfly settles on the window frame.

I watch her wings gently open and close and I know she is a gift from far away...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
A stollen moment, healing and gentle

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trurorob
Nicely soft and gentle.
Rob
darkhorse555
beautifully crafted picture dear friend excellent pieceangel wine
gnj4u
Hi, ladyjewel,
Each Complete moment is a precious gift and its nice when one takes the time to savour it. Thanks for sharing with us your gift from far away.
beautifulyou
wow, this is absoulutely gorgeous ladyjewel,
a gem, no doubt,
thank you... so peaceful, so quieting! rose
adjhe
ladyjewelery
Very nice write. Inspiring to my soul. If only these moments came around more often.
mimzy333
this brings back my own moments of soothing times. loved it my dear friend.
TAR_734
Sweet & Poignant!...Lovelyangel
Wonderful Write ladyjewel,
Herein lies a "Gem"!heart wings
Robertbouquet
teddybear
steve1223
Such beautiful and gentle words ... the true soul of a poet

bouquet bouquet
Nuwahri61
Lovely write LJ ..........really felt this .........thanks for sharing...Regards Nucool
Macduff5
Hi Jewel,

Sometimes it's the little things in life that remind us of a greater whole. Nicely penned. wine bouquet
Angel04
Healing and gentle indeed Ladyjewel, I know of these moments, that place of solitude and stillness in ones self, they say if you come across feather or a butterfly it is the angels reaching you, what a beautiful poem

Angiehug kiss angel angel angel
Tango40
"A breeze blows in and lifts my hair slightly,kisses my cheek"teddybear .
Ladyjewel i love that line and this poem gave me a reminder of the past.
Im very new to poetry an ive seen so many poems that are so gifted.
This poem hit me deeply,God Bless you for this oneangel
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