FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKDec 20, 2011
Hi TRP
You have a flair for rhyme and also a good sense of rhythm in this series of couplets. If you don't mind me saying, when the narrative is fairly lengthy as in this case - 28 lines, I think the reader is helped if it is broken up into 7 four line stanzas. That is simply my opinion.
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You have a flair for rhyme and also a good sense of rhythm in this series of couplets. If you don't mind me saying, when the narrative is fairly lengthy as in this case - 28 lines, I think the reader is helped if it is broken up into 7 four line stanzas. That is simply my opinion.
Best wishes
Fellsman