A ring

It was shiny as headlight
Its hedges smooth as bright
It came in a box so pretty
and light
Oh what a delight

I open my eyes to see it sight,
then i realize it was mine
alright

My heart was happy
everything felt right
I just knew this was my moment,
to smile with my might


As long as i had it,
all will be right
It takes one day to fall
and another to get up and fight

I smile so much that night
the stars moan with fright
I just felt so happy to get
mine alright
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2012
About this poem:
New to the poetry corner. So my poem is not much. Its about a girl receiving an engagement ring

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SweetnNeat
Thank you so much Swade for the welcomecheers cheers
cafetwo2010
Hello SweetnNeat! Swade said it very well..Your inner voice comes out loud and clear and exudes a beautiful spirit. Keep writing us more and more..professor cool teddybear
Happygolucky4u
Welcome to Poets Corner. I found your poem to be a happy delight bouquet wave
prenge
Don't stop. share with us your insights. great reflection of how the female respond
SweetnNeat
@Cafe. Thank you for your lovely compliments.teddybear
SweetnNeat
@Happy. Thank you, it is lolbeer
SweetnNeat
@Prenge. I wont stop dear and thank youcheers
darkhorse555
deep beautifully crafted pieceangel
SweetnNeat
@Darkhorse. Thank you dearteddybear
orientalkoru
Welcome to PC. This is a beautiful piece...you told me a story so real...I could see, feel, hear the delight you have that night! handshake wine
SweetnNeat
@Oriental. Thank you for the warm welcome and the lovely comments handshake
fjamesj9701
I enjoyed it very much and you have written it well with imagery. Don't sell yourself short this is really good stuff.Thank you for posting and welcome hereā€¦Jessewine
SweetnNeat
@Jesse. Thank you so much for the encouragement and the lovely complimentsteddybear
sundayrose1
Times of our lives that mark the moments of moments. Captured so vividly on this write..

Thanks my dear poet for sharing this feelings. Not too often we do get the chance to have the impact but the effect lasts a lifetime.

Thank you again.

SRbouquet bouquet teddybear
SweetnNeat
@SR. Thank you so much, much appreciatedcheers
beautifulyou
hi SweetnNeat,
swade said it well... 'This poem expresses a beautiful, genuine JOY from the heart..'

nice job and a warm welcome!
SweetnNeat
@Beautiful. Thank you for the lovely complimentteddybear And the warm welcome
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