Just Broken

broken hearts, loves deceit
pieces fall down to my feet
broken promise, loves a lie
puddles form from tears i cry
broken dreams, loves illusion
sorrow caused from your intrusion
broken hope, loves a game
it never lasts, and ends the same
broken sleep, loves the cause
digs at me with sharpened claws
broken spirit, love caused sorrow
stolen forever from my tomorrow
broken life, love is lost
broken forever and thats the cost
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Posted: May 2012

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CloudySky
Very strong and moving poem, LizzyBear. Welcome to poet's corner. Hope you find healing in your writing. wave
kickit22
straight from a heart that's been broken a couple times or more..
don't give up on love just have to love the right one. not just anyone..
kickit
Fellsman
Hi Lizzybear

Your show a real flair for rhyme in this short poem... A nice write

Best wishes

Bill gift
Poetnumber1
This is indeed a touching write,you write with your soulgiftM.M
soulgoddess
What a lovely poem, lizzy!
I give you a 'Haiku' in response...


A willow
that bends
but never breaks

An eagle
that glides and soars
with all different winds

Water
that flows
through stones or rocks

Water
that makes new paths
when there's obstacles

To experience
and return
with greater clarity and insight

God Bless heart wings
windyweatherly
Lizzybear this is so beautiful and so heartfelt.

Thanks for sharing.
Windy
Victorsfmallare
:) Beautiful write
albokheti
waw you have an undescribeable feeling
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