broken hearts, loves deceit pieces fall down to my feet broken promise, loves a lie puddles form from tears i cry broken dreams, loves illusion sorrow caused from your intrusion broken hope, loves a game it never lasts, and ends the same broken sleep, loves the cause digs at me with sharpened claws broken spirit, love caused sorrow stolen forever from my tomorrow broken life, love is lost broken forever and thats the cost
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don't give up on love just have to love the right one. not just anyone..
kickit
Your show a real flair for rhyme in this short poem... A nice write
Best wishes
Bill
I give you a 'Haiku' in response...
A willow
that bends
but never breaks
An eagle
that glides and soars
with all different winds
Water
that flows
through stones or rocks
Water
that makes new paths
when there's obstacles
To experience
and return
with greater clarity and insight
God Bless
Thanks for sharing.
Windy