IN DREAMS

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May 2012 451 Views 19 comments

IN DREAMS

Author: Unknown

Your eyes glisten like sapphires in night sky, dreams filled with "I love you" and walks in nights eye. What mystic fruit you yield as midnight and morn, as love is reborn. To extreme to conceal,too intense to hide,to love we must abide. I lay me down to sleep as for you I weep, only to awake from slumber alone once more.

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Posted: May 2012

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Comments (19)

bjallenOPunknown, Washington USAMay 19, 2012

ty 4 ur comment

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 19, 2012

I'm in agreement with the first comment,thanks for sharing another lovely write

M.M

bjallenOPunknown, Washington USAMay 19, 2012

thank you for reading poet#1

niah9Auckland, New ZealandMay 20, 2012

what a romantic write...beautiful...Kathy

bjallenOPunknown, Washington USAMay 20, 2012

thank you kathy for your comment I also enjoy reading your poetry

bjallenOPunknown, Washington USAMay 20, 2012

thank you celtic for your wise eye on my spelling

I'm glad you liked the poem.

windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAMay 20, 2012

Bkallen welcome what a very short yet so forceful in the substance. Keep them coming will you?

Thanks
Windy

online today!

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAMay 20, 2012

What a lovely but sad piece

ImamuralNorth Canton, Ohio USAMay 20, 2012

The flow in its form is remarkably smooth. Sapphires, mystic fruit and emotion abound; a beautiful poem you've created!

bjallenOPunknown, Washington USAMay 20, 2012

thank you windy,happy,and imamural for your comments, glad you liked the read

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAMay 23, 2012

It has been a long time since I had a dream of love. It would be nice if I could have them more often!

bjallenOPunknown, Washington USAMay 24, 2012

yes mcrad it is a wonderous thing this powerfull and gentle thing we call love

bjallenOPunknown, Washington USAMay 24, 2012

celtic ty the help you give is very much appreciated as spelling is not one of my finer points in life and learning from others I value very much. thank you soooooo much.