THE WRITTEN PICTURE OF A CONFUSED MIND

A celestial body rising high above a field of green
give the perfect compliment to the warm summer twilight
lit with soft shades of purple, blue, and pink
causing me to stop and stare at the scene
that has graciously materialize within my sight
but scared to lose the vision, I do not dare a blink
for the apparition I see is full of mystique
taking my thoughts on a journey so compelling
that I myself can not understand the way they flow
so inside my head the mental shutter clicks
capturing the moment in gorgeous detailing
as phantom shapes move slowly along below.
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Posted: Jun 2012

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lucy1777
Very descriptive Jane! Thanks for sharing,,,,,thumbs up
andrew149
I enjoyed the read, thankyou very much poetjane...Andrew...xxxcool
poetjane
Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate it...teddybear
mcradloff
It has been awhile since I have seen a sunrise or sunset. I should write down the times so I can plan on one, they are really neat.uncertain very happy heart wings
vyoleta
Don't be confused, poetess, your poem is so beautiful.

Excuse me, I am in the picture mania phase (it catches me from time to time lol), so I must use this ideal opportunity.

Best wishes.

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poetjane
Mucho Gracious! Thank You.teddybear
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