Unfinished 1

longhairedwoman

by longhairedwomanRiverhead, New York, USA

Oct 2009 390 Views 8 comments

Unfinished #1

Author: longhairedwoman

To have come such a long way
One starts to think that one is cured
Of misconceptions and surprise
Starting to get it
Then comes suddenly and maybe
And different means of approaching
And thoughts of other ways of seeing
Through an open window
Occurring and reoccurring
More than a glimpse

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Posted: Oct 2009

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Comments (8)

Bentlee

BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 1, 2009

Very cool, well said truths an thoughts, ty for sharing:)

gypsyheart

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaNov 1, 2009

Beautifully expressed with wisdom inside longhairedwoman.Thanks for sharing

jazzy75

jazzy75Houston, Texas USANov 1, 2009

longhairedwoman - love the concepts and poem. thanks for sharing

trurorob

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainNov 1, 2009

great words
rob

andrew149

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKNov 1, 2009

very well written and expressed, thankyou very much.....andrew.....xxx

boyshchrm6

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaNov 1, 2009

Perception and understanding. Beautifully worded.

longhairedwoman

longhairedwomanOPRiverhead, New York USANov 1, 2009

Thank you all for your feedback. I know it's meaningful to me, but I thought maybe too cryptic for others. It's nice to know that others 'get it.'

Redex

RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 2, 2009

loved this and put into words is so true thankyou

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