Drawn

Spartacus2012

by Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi, USA

Feb 2013 663 Views 10 comments

"Drawn"

Author: Spartacus2012

I am drawn
to you,
magnet to steel,
pulling me
through the eye
of your needle
to your spinning loom,

Into your tangled web,
please my love,
do not be
as a black widow
and devour me,
as I dance
my way to you...

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Feb 2013

About this poem:

being vulnerable..

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Comments (10)

LadyMorgana60

LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKFeb 23, 2013

Hi Spartacus

We all can feel vulnerable when we open ourselves to new love..its trust in that person and ourselves..and allowing oneself to let that grow..
Liked your interpretation of the Black widow spider.. as I did the whole poem..

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAFeb 23, 2013

Thank you my LadyMorgana for your kind commentary...Ken

windyweatherly

windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAFeb 23, 2013

Ken at one time or another, we all become drawn so inexplicably into the spell, charms, spirit, of those that attract us. What a world of an adventure that is, at least for me. Totally relatable. Universal and so humanly.

Thanks for sharing..

Windy

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAFeb 23, 2013

Thank you Windy for your understanding and empathy...Ken

cherryreggae

cherryreggaebayside, New York USAFeb 23, 2013

Such a true sincere write, when opening up we sometimes lose and fall into vulnerable consequences!! Very enjoyable read thankyou for sharing....

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAFeb 24, 2013

Thank you CR for stopping by,,,Ken

shadow1950

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKFeb 25, 2013

powerful words well penned

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAFeb 25, 2013

Thank you Shadow, much appreciated..Ken

Poetnumber1

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoFeb 25, 2013

Nicely done ken,apparently i missed this one

''Devour me as i dance my way to you''

Spartacus2012

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAFeb 25, 2013

Thanks Poetnumber1..Good to read from you friend..Ken

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