perfect stranger

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Feb 2013 832 Views 25 comments

perfect stranger

my hand is out for a dream
holding someone special
to walk in life
you at my side,
a friend for life
to be forever happy
a dream the perfect woman
lifes mystery
you are out there
if my dream comes true
holding out for a miracle
looking for you
loves finest hour
still a stranger to me

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Posted: Feb 2013

About this poem:

looking for the one at the crossroads

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Comments (25)

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 4, 2013

Love can be a ghost, a memory, or the fleeing end.of a rainbow, but sooner or later you will get your pot of gold. Then all you have to do is receive it and return it. Good write, i can dig it...Jesse

JyonnahReading, Pennsylvania USAMay 4, 2013

Wow, what a sweet dream!

I pray you find your dream lady soon, Liam. You have such great spirit and tender love to give. Awesome poem!!

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 5, 2013

jesse i am digging deep brilliant comment like yourself finding the end of the rainbow like a trout swimming against the current i will get there one day i hope

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niah9Auckland, New ZealandMay 5, 2013

please...make the text a little darker.....I can't read it....

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAMay 5, 2013

Highlight Kathy Highlight or hit post and you can read...now don't cry no more your world is right again

I believe we poets are dreamers. May all our good dreams come true. Loved your poem darkhorse

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMay 5, 2013

I love writes like this full of mystic and romance well penned Liam

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niah9Auckland, New ZealandMay 5, 2013

Worth the wait darkhorse.....but I believe the fun is often in the mystery...great write...and thanks for adjustment....Kathy

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 7, 2013

jyonnah you give me ever so beautiful comments amazing thank youso much

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMay 7, 2013

Hi Darkhorse

I do hope all your dreams come true... angel2

Wonderful poem
Thank you for sharing

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 8, 2013

niah9 i darkened it for you thanks for pointing it out to me

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 10, 2013

rapturecapture for such a beautiful comment thank you so much

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 10, 2013

happygolucky thannk you so much

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 10, 2013

lovely to speak to you linda thank you for your comment always appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMay 10, 2013

thank you so much niah

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMay 10, 2013

Hi Liam

Your heart-felt poem bring to mind these couple of lines from Hamlet's famous soliloquy:

To die to sleep: To sleep, perchance to Dream; Aye, there's the rub...

There indeed is the rub, a really fine write buddy...

Regards

Bill