My Vision smmerwinds challenge

by shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England, UK

Mar 2013 569 Views 8 comments

My Vision (smmerwind's challenge)

Author: shadow1950

My Vision

A world full of beauty
where sparkling streams
flow into crystal clear waters

the air so clear
you can see for miles
bright blue its hue

radiant flowers everywhere
sweet, sweet scent
flowing in the breeze

birds singing in delight
deer frolic in verdant valleys
everything so full of life

at last we have learnt
cleaned up our act
brought love and peace

to our beautiful world
now it shimmers and gleams
full of vibrant light

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Mar 2013

About this poem:

hope you like this. Phyllis, this is how I would like our world to be I live in hope some day it will come true

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smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAMar 5, 2013

JUST BEAUTIFUL MY DEAR LINDA. YOU COULDN'T HAVE MADE IT ANY BETTER. IT IS YOUR SIGNATURE AND YOUR EXPRESSION ON HOW WE CAN CREATE BALANCE TO PRODUCE HARMONY IN A WORLD SO OUT OF ORDER.

I LOVE YOU MY FRIEND.

shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKMar 5, 2013

you gave us this challenge at just the right time. After writing What the hell I had been thinking that I should at some point counter-balance it so your challenge was perfect
so glad you liked it Phyllis