I WANT TO STAND WITH YOU

I WANT TO STAND WITH YOU (video presentation)
Author: filomena/windy
MY HUMANITY CHALLENGE


Seasoned in time on life you repulsively forgetting
The gutter's and the alley's creatures crawling in your torn blanket
Did you pick it up from the new recycled bin of walmart?
Wet and chiseled with dew drops dancing lights into your eyes
Laid flat on the ground you seek to own if only for a while
While the sun warmed it up to provide comfort on your back
Yet the pangs of hunger coiling inside your guts
Would you stand up as if tomorrow is another day
That will raise your hopes far better than yesterday?

Oh but you never know really what is in store for you
Just as much as your mind wonders in the promises of tomorrow
I passed you by, yet not a forlorn look in your face
Smiling deeply contented on the morning haste.

I want to reach you deep down on your pain
Etched in your wrinkled unbathed face for God knows how long
But you looked away with a glimmer of tears in your eyes
As if to match the brilliance of the sun on the morning light.

Then.. I heard your voice, sweet and yet hollow
"Tomorrow is Christmas I can't wait to see the glow"
The glow of hope and light emanating from your deep sorrow

YOU MADE ME FEEL THE PAIN OF MY OWN TOMORROW.






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Posted: Wed Mar 13, 2013 10:39 PM

About this poem:
Truly this is the backbone of my calling.

I POSTED UNDER WINDY LAST YEAR

Thanks all for your contributions and input.

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Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
THANKS FOR READING

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Comments (9)

2725dl
Keep going Girlyay yay yay
smmerwind
Tony your message that I haven't aknowledged thanks for being a friend

Take care
madtat29
This world would be lost without good caring people like you,
Putting every effort into making this world a better place...
You have my utmost respect and I'm glad to all you friend...hug
smmerwind
Thank you Liza as always
Poetnumber1
I commented on two past post of this poem you deleted.So far has to be you at your very best.applause Wonderful poetry dear poet.handshake cheers
smmerwind
Thanks for all the inspired gesture you have accorded me Tony.

Sometimes no matter how strong we think we are, we do need support to carry such magnitude

Thanks again
smmerwind
My dear friend M thanks so much for your visit a again.

Always appreciate

Filomena
gnj4u
Hi, smmerwind,
The test of humanity resides in each moment that two souls touch one another; and, through that touch, hope for tomorrow can emerge. Thanks for sharing.
smmerwind
Joy thanks so much for your visit and comments
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