hurts, sorrows and misfortunes may have fallen like autumn leaves brushing our pains, sharp and bitter lacerating our bloodless wounds but yet these battles even as we stand mutilated broken and helpless it does build our character strong, making us alert, keen and weak no more, after all when the storms have passed the moon will come out again the sun will rise, the stars will lit at night the trees will hum a tune the wind will sing a lullaby as the birds will fly high up in the blue rainbow colored sky yes, after the bitterness of dissappointment ceases it is still a beautiful life.
Yes Phyllis it is just life, and as a friend I see an underlined feeling in your recent poems and as a friend I lend myself if you need it. Thank you for another beautiful writing and just keep on if it gets it out there, Jesse
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 14, 2013
I always admire your moving poems Phyllis and I think this is one is no exception. I totally agree with Jesse's review, beautifully done! You have a friend in me also. Big hugs to you.
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