She is thin and under six feet Part of the minority of contractor women On a base full of males I imagine her catching sight of her body In a full-length mirror in her dusty, little room Appraising her nakedness Under a brutal Afghan sun within a hard, surgical introspection The long legs The vein that pulsates at the very edge of her hipbone She is reminded of the lean years in Sarajevo By the shadow of her ribs When hunger was a constant companion And the incoming shells, insistent and unwelcome guests she stares at the years as they show on her hands The bones roll beneath taut skin as she flexes her fingers As if they are claws She imagnes scratching a man's face Watching in fascination as the blood wells from the wounds And then this thought Slithers away like a frightened reptile Her eyes stare back at her, doe-like, deep brown under long lashes No make up needed Her hair, so short, so EUROPEAN Radiating from chestnut roots out to spiky, lemonade ends A slightly protruding belly A protective rubbing with her cat-like hands Wishing a child resided there, a barren desert And like a muddy pool of water The thought evaporates, and conspires to bring her back to her room She dresses slowly, mechanically, within a massive melancholy She exits the room Walking to work past the small group of women huddled together Speaking in whispers and malicious gossip And she pretends not to notice Their barely disguised hostility
Globegypsy - I checked out your blog and saw this there too. You write very well, it's nice to meet you here. You made a comment about being alone on another poem, anyone who has seen a lot of death or come close to it realises that we are alone at birth, in our dreams and when we die. In between, the choice is our own, I love solitude but not solitary confinement and I love to be left alone but not be lonely. I reckon you would understand what I'm saying here. Glad to see you made it back to Georgia,USA.
Odette, thanks for the comment Rob, thanks as well for your comments; from you this is high praise LadyBee, so you have been to my blog? thanks! How about making a comment there! LOL
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Rob
You made a comment about being alone on another poem, anyone who has seen a lot of death or come close to it realises that we are alone at birth, in our dreams and when we die. In between, the choice is our own, I love solitude but not solitary confinement and I love to be left alone but not be lonely. I reckon you would understand what I'm saying here. Glad to see you made it back to Georgia,USA.
Rob, thanks as well for your comments; from you this is high praise
LadyBee, so you have been to my blog? thanks! How about making a comment there! LOL
Jon thanks for yout comments.
I have read this a few times now and it haunts me everytime
Thank you for this amazing read.. it griped me