The Maiden of Magadan (Fellsman challenge?)

The maiden of Magadan

The wind rustles in the leaves,
crisp air whispers through the trees carrying
your name to me in delicate spider web dreams.
She becomes the blue sky peeking between angry grey clouds,
a taste of hope in an otherwise cold and bitter day.
Just a moment of her, a glimpse just at the edge of my vision;
there and then gone, so fragile,
she is like the powder on butterfly wings.
I know she is there and yet I am blinded by reality,
a lovely silken shroud.
Yet she becomes just a face in the crowd.
And suddenly, I am back in the forest,
Frantically turning in slow circles searching for a phantom.
And all that remains is a wisp of her perfume and my insanity
Within a cold Siberian forest.
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Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
Magadan is in Siberia on the far east of Russia. Siberia is a land populated by ghosts and ancient spirits, paved by the road of bones from the Stalin years.
I wasn't sure if I was supposed to put 'challenge' on the name..Not even sure if I qualify..

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Fellsman
Hi globegypsy

It's Shadow's challenge not mine - I have the easy job of declaring if the answer is correct or not. wine It's a terrific tale and a very good stand alone poem, challenge or no challenge. A fine write, but not the correct answer.

Bill cheers
shadow1950
great poem but way off think flying
fjamesj9701
NO NO NO YOU HAVE IT ALL WRONG! Na just kidding, what is the challenge? Good write though my friend...Jessecheers
Poetnumber1
Its a wee bit off of the challenge brolaugh But i like your poem,i think its really good.cheers
Odette67
Stunning writing as ever from you. purple heart
globegypsy4ever
HAHAHHA Apparently I am an idiot!! LOL Oh well, next challenge I promise to actually READ IT!!
Fellsman, thanks for the comments and the explanation
Linda, :) thank you for the comments!!
Jessie, laugh Thanks bro for the great comments and the laughs
PN1, I have read yr work bro, coming from u this comment is tops!!
Odette, thanks for the comment..
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