visions or illusions (challenge)

visions through misty streams of fog
sometimes espied then in a blink gone
what was it that briefly appeared
was it even ever really there?

a shifting shape a puzzling glimpse
do my eyes deceive me as I peer
trying to see if its real or not
my eyes oft do perceive an illusion

for such creatures can't really exist
they are the things of legends
yet my soul says they are really there
which should I believe I ask myself?

of all the things that come to us
in dreams or awake are they just hocus pocus
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Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
what am I seeing? it could be something real or maybe mythical
make up your own lets see who has the best vision or illusion
fellsman knows what I am thinking of and has pictures
you can either guess what I am thinking off and describing in my poem or make your own poem keeping within the theme of vision or/ and illusions
final choice is Bill's on the poems
a joint one on guessing what I see

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shadow1950
fellsman is judge on this
Fellsman
A helpful (at least I hope it's helpful) clue for anyone wishing to take a shot at this is that you need to be thinking Greek mythology, the two creatures are mutants of their more common bretheren.

I had no part in nominating the creatures, but have simply been asked to adjudicate on the entries.

Anyone getting the name of BOTH creatures without a further clue can consider themselves a genius. professor

Bill wink
shadow1950
I will add 1 hint they can fly
Fellsman
And forget Pegasus, that would be too easy... uh oh
Poetnumber1
This sounds like a fun challenge.I shall give it a try,hopefully no one comes with the answer before.
globegypsy4ever
Shadow, Fellsman, my apologies, apparently I am an idiot. doh
Its been a great EASTER holiday. wine
Perhaps a pixie?
shadow1950
gl M.M I await your enter with anticipationteddybear bouquet hug wine angel
shadow1950
sry Brian not a pixie keep guessing lol
fjamesj9701
Can I have unicocorns for 200 Bill? Need some Jeopardy theme music here.....Jesse
Fellsman
Further clues -

The Unicorn - this is not a million miles away from the correct answer. Think mutants...

For one of the answers contestants need to be thinking female - a horribly grotesque creature. There is a connection to Hercules in Greek legend. wine
shadow1950
Jessie you can have 150 points because although on right track your answer is not totally correct
keep tryingteddybear bouquet hug
Ladybee42
I think it's a Centaur or a Hippocentaur, but I'd love to do a poem about one, such a lovely mythical creature.

Lovely poem Shadow.

purple heart purple heart
shadow1950
madtat sorry no try again
shadow1950
hi ladybee please do post a poem

but I am afraid its not one of the right answers
one of the clues is they fly and you are looking for two separate things there's a total of 1100 points available but Jessie has won 150 so now 950 points left
Poetnumber1
I had to do some research for this one and perhaps i may still be wrong.But my poem is on its way Linda.I hope you are having a fun day.hug
Ladybee42
Aha, I see, the other 'Hippo' laugh Lovely too, but I've no idea what the second creature might be. I'll stick with the Centaur though, I'll be composing as I work!

writing

purple heart purple heart
shadow1950
M.M I am having lots of fun lol I think Bill is going to post a clear set of rules and explanations and hints also deadline
I look forward to your take on this
teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine angel innocent
shadow1950
centaur is good idea looking forward to your poem gl ladybeeteddybear bouquet hug
fjamesj9701
Is it a puca
shadow1950
sorry no not even near
Poetnumber1
Whats a Puca Jesserolling on the floor laughing.Just kidding,Isn't that an Irish folklore and Welsh mythology? blues
shadow1950
puca is irish for goblin but not correct
LadyMorgana60
Umm.. just wondering if your vision or illusions poem are of the two sisters of Medusa..though she was mortal transformed to a gorgon ..her sisters Stheno & Euryale where true blood gorgon. They had wings :)

Fab poem Shadow & enjoyed very much.bouquet gift purple heart
shadow1950
Hi Joy keep guessing Bill will reveal all on Friday at 9pm BST ty for readingteddybear bouquet hug
madtat29
A Griffin then?perhaps?
shadow1950
good guess Tony all will be revealed tomorrow
teddybear bouquet hug
madtat29
I'm playing God of war on my PlayStation right now..harpies for the grotesque one ...grin
shadow1950
ty Tony you will have to wait to see if you are right
Bill has posted the final clues gl all and ty for joining in
teddybear bouquet hug wine
paloma66
Was it Skylla one of the Phorcydes or a Gorgon?
paloma66
A Gryphon?
paloma66
A harpie?
paloma66
A harpie? A Chimera?
shadow1950
hi Paloma you will have to wait for Bill to say who is right if anyone teddybear bouquet hug wine
paloma66
I'll call it a day trying dear shadow,got my grey cells in disarray.laugh
paloma66
One final go.....I think its Chimera. The other Scylla.
Bajanshay
Shadow is it Hydra
shadow1950
ty good guesses all will be revealed tonight I will just say keep guessing because no-one has it a 100% correct so far gl all and ty for joining inteddybear bouquet hug
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