visions through misty streams of fog sometimes espied then in a blink gone what was it that briefly appeared was it even ever really there?
a shifting shape a puzzling glimpse do my eyes deceive me as I peer trying to see if its real or not my eyes oft do perceive an illusion
for such creatures can't really exist they are the things of legends yet my soul says they are really there which should I believe I ask myself?
of all the things that come to us in dreams or awake are they just hocus pocus
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Posted: Mar 2013
About this poem:
what am I seeing? it could be something real or maybe mythical make up your own lets see who has the best vision or illusion fellsman knows what I am thinking of and has pictures you can either guess what I am thinking off and describing in my poem or make your own poem keeping within the theme of vision or/ and illusions final choice is Bill's on the poems a joint one on guessing what I see
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKMar 31, 2013
fellsman is judge on this
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMar 31, 2013
A helpful (at least I hope it's helpful) clue for anyone wishing to take a shot at this is that you need to be thinking Greek mythology, the two creatures are mutants of their more common bretheren.
I had no part in nominating the creatures, but have simply been asked to adjudicate on the entries.
Anyone getting the name of BOTH creatures without a further clue can consider themselves a genius.
Bill
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKMar 31, 2013
I will add 1 hint they can fly
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMar 31, 2013
And forget Pegasus, that would be too easy...
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 31, 2013
This sounds like a fun challenge.I shall give it a try,hopefully no one comes with the answer before.
I think it's a Centaur or a Hippocentaur, but I'd love to do a poem about one, such a lovely mythical creature.
Lovely poem Shadow.
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKApr 1, 2013
madtat sorry no try again
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKApr 1, 2013
hi ladybee please do post a poem
but I am afraid its not one of the right answers one of the clues is they fly and you are looking for two separate things there's a total of 1100 points available but Jessie has won 150 so now 950 points left
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoApr 1, 2013
I had to do some research for this one and perhaps i may still be wrong.But my poem is on its way Linda.I hope you are having a fun day.
Aha, I see, the other 'Hippo' Lovely too, but I've no idea what the second creature might be. I'll stick with the Centaur though, I'll be composing as I work!
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKApr 1, 2013
M.M I am having lots of fun lol I think Bill is going to post a clear set of rules and explanations and hints also deadline I look forward to your take on this
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKApr 1, 2013
centaur is good idea looking forward to your poem gl ladybee
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKApr 1, 2013
sorry no not even near
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoApr 1, 2013
Whats a Puca Jesse.Just kidding,Isn't that an Irish folklore and Welsh mythology?
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKApr 2, 2013
puca is irish for goblin but not correct
LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKApr 2, 2013
Umm.. just wondering if your vision or illusions poem are of the two sisters of Medusa..though she was mortal transformed to a gorgon ..her sisters Stheno & Euryale where true blood gorgon. They had wings :)
Fab poem Shadow & enjoyed very much.
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKApr 2, 2013
Hi Joy keep guessing Bill will reveal all on Friday at 9pm BST ty for reading
Comments (37)
I had no part in nominating the creatures, but have simply been asked to adjudicate on the entries.
Anyone getting the name of BOTH creatures without a further clue can consider themselves a genius.
Bill
Its been a great EASTER holiday.
Perhaps a pixie?
The Unicorn - this is not a million miles away from the correct answer. Think mutants...
For one of the answers contestants need to be thinking female - a horribly grotesque creature. There is a connection to Hercules in Greek legend.
keep trying
Lovely poem Shadow.
but I am afraid its not one of the right answers
one of the clues is they fly and you are looking for two separate things there's a total of 1100 points available but Jessie has won 150 so now 950 points left
I look forward to your take on this
Fab poem Shadow & enjoyed very much.
Bill has posted the final clues gl all and ty for joining in